Recent Comments

bbRyan
10/4/22, 1:56 AM
@Plymouth58 I see you mention kind of a back story on these thug guys. I think that's good, it can help explain how Kyle did screw up his life and why the horrible revenge is needed. Maybe once we understand that then the final destruction of Kyle can happen. While I'm completely for totally destroying him, the way he acted when his friend found him shows he's already in a pretty horrible state and likely irreversible now. I know some don't like this being a dark story, but it's nice to see once the good guy totally lose. If I had a suggestion for improvement I'd suggest trying to keep a good pace. This one was good, however some of the previous ones drug on a little too much. I did wonder if you'd make one of his friends take on the identity of a new Green Lantern who becomes a double agent helping their criminal friends while looking like a good guy. Anyway, keep up the great work! Please don't hold back on anything when it comes to destroying Kyle!

10/4/22, 9:05 AM
@bbRyan Hi! I'll try to take more care of the pacing, buddy, you made a fair criticism. I agree sometimes is a bit too much, I think chapter 12 needed an extra trimming. I take note of everything, thank you very much for your positive comments and your suggestions! :slightly_smiling_face:
Evan
10/4/22, 7:36 AM
Fantastic! I still love how you weave in some references to your other stories like the Iron Bulls and Zeus and his husband. Hot as always. Thank you for your writing.
10/4/22, 5:36 AM
I remember reading that story! I'd love to see where you take this.
10/4/22, 3:24 AM
This was GREAT. Perfect side story to the rest of the series. What a transformation!
Footy73
10/4/22, 2:08 AM
Hypnotised to serve a hot Cigar smoking Master hmmm!! Hot and horny story :yum:
Martin
10/3/22, 9:44 PM
Interesting start! Hot sex scene, I love oil on skin :)
10/3/22, 7:28 PM
This was really good. Great writing. I love breaking the fourth wall and addressing plot lines for Hero Vs Villans sagas. I WANT MORE but that's me. Would have loved to have read about Green and Black converting fellow classmates into minions. This was Great really enjoyed it Thank you for this.

10/3/22, 7:39 PM
@Redneck Cubby Really happy to hear you enjoyed this! It was great fun to explore.
10/3/22, 5:45 PM
Excited for more!
Anonymous
10/3/22, 5:08 PM
this is so good like i am so serious about that
Anonymous
10/3/22, 3:32 PM
Really good start, can't wait to see where you take it next!