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10/3/22, 8:32 PM
Thanks for posting this story. I hope you continue the story. What effect does the creature's cum have on a man. I'm picturing The Aracnotaur converting James into another man-spider by fucking his ass several times. His muscles would grow and body would change. Only James' new body can break free of the cocoon. The Aracnotaur has found sustenance in his captures' cocks but how does he satisfy his sexual hungar?

10/4/22, 11:21 AM
@TexMuscle no plans on a sequel (yet) but I might do some more Monster Files with new sexual abominations
10/3/22, 7:43 PM
I really like that one. I knew milking is a fetish but never read a story about it until now.

10/4/22, 11:20 AM
@RedPandaCat hopefully this opens up an avenue of sexual deviency for you ;)
Anonymous
10/4/22, 10:05 AM
This was amazingly well written!

10/4/22, 11:08 AM
@ Thanks! It's a little bit weird, but I'm glad it appealed!
10/4/22, 10:53 AM
As the story marches on the inevitable conclusion begins to take shape and for the first time, I'm starting to get worried about what's going to happen to Trevor. It seems more and more likely that he's going to try enlisting but I fear he will be unable to cope mentally and have a serious breakdown. Plus it can't be healthy to let your kink take over your whole life like that. I'm holding out hope that he can strike a safe and sensible balance between kink and his real life, maybe reserve service in the National Guard could be an option. Thank you for continuing to actively include Omar as a key part of the narrative. I really appreciate that Liam sort Omar's input and consent for his kink relationship with Trevor. It shows a healthy aspect of kink culture and open relationships that never gets mentioned in stories. While I know the story is predominantly about Trevor, but I hope whatever decision he makes in the end that he also thinks about Omar's future and happiness. Keep up the get work. Loved every chapter so far
10/3/22, 11:47 PM
Excellent short yet super hot story. No quarters given to the unsuspecting lad, and the promise of maybe more. As always, amazing job, Twan!

10/4/22, 10:35 AM
@Essex Thank you so much! I'll try not to disappoint!
10/4/22, 9:39 AM
can't wait for a more chapter. This whole story with incest, transformation, hypnosis, pecmilk, groupsex (and more) and the greek mythology concept with Eris and Eros fucking up reality, i just love everything! I hope you will continue some day, in the meantime i will fap to it every now and then. Good job! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
EntrancedGay92
10/4/22, 9:27 AM
You are becoming one of my favorite authors! Thanks for adding to this already great story. I love that Omar is active and encouraging with Trevor's kink; gives me hope that one day my own husband will be the same. Lol.
bbRyan
10/4/22, 1:56 AM
@Plymouth58 I see you mention kind of a back story on these thug guys. I think that's good, it can help explain how Kyle did screw up his life and why the horrible revenge is needed. Maybe once we understand that then the final destruction of Kyle can happen. While I'm completely for totally destroying him, the way he acted when his friend found him shows he's already in a pretty horrible state and likely irreversible now. I know some don't like this being a dark story, but it's nice to see once the good guy totally lose. If I had a suggestion for improvement I'd suggest trying to keep a good pace. This one was good, however some of the previous ones drug on a little too much. I did wonder if you'd make one of his friends take on the identity of a new Green Lantern who becomes a double agent helping their criminal friends while looking like a good guy. Anyway, keep up the great work! Please don't hold back on anything when it comes to destroying Kyle!

10/4/22, 9:05 AM
@bbRyan Hi! I'll try to take more care of the pacing, buddy, you made a fair criticism. I agree sometimes is a bit too much, I think chapter 12 needed an extra trimming. I take note of everything, thank you very much for your positive comments and your suggestions! :slightly_smiling_face:
Evan
10/4/22, 7:36 AM
Fantastic! I still love how you weave in some references to your other stories like the Iron Bulls and Zeus and his husband. Hot as always. Thank you for your writing.
10/4/22, 5:36 AM
I remember reading that story! I'd love to see where you take this.