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10/2/22, 9:10 PM
Just to add my two cents, I think you've done a really good job. The sex scenes are hot, and the corruption is done slowly and believably, which adds to the hotness. In terms of plot progression, it's done incredibly well. Despite English not being your first language, I think you've written something of pretty high quality in English, which is also incredibly impressive. Yo he estudiado castellano por casi catorce años, y nunca podría escribir algo así en castellano jaja. The only thing is that, for me, I'd just rather read something else. Some of the kinks are major turn offs for me, and to be honest, I just hate T-Bone and Chuy as characters. Please don't misunderstand; they are very well-written characters! Their motivations and personalities are very clear and understandable. But it is because I understand them so well that I just cannot stand them. Their myopic view of the world just reminds me of people I know in real life (and if I'm honest, some of my own personal flaws lol) so it's just...grating for me personally to watch them get away with so much. But again, these aren't really criticisms; they're just my personal preferences. All of that said, the fact that I did read this far even with all the problems I have with it just goes to show that it's very well written! Despite my personal gripes with Tyron and Chuy, I do think that they're quite hot Daddy fantasies. Like I mentioned, some of the kinks aren't for me (like the humiliation or piss) but the transformation/corruption of Kyle is very hot, to the point where, again, I read this far just for that. Please keep writing!

10/3/22, 12:07 AM
@MCBrain Man, thank you very much for taking the time to write such a complete and nice comment, I really appreciate it. Your opinion of Chuy and T-Bone makes me very happy, and that they remind you of someone in real life, it's a great achievement for me. And yes, they are a couple of obtuse selfish jerks, I totally understand if you hate them as persons, but I'm glad you find them well written and that you're liking the corrupting elements on the story despite the not so pleasant kinks here and there. It means a lot to me to have your presence and support here despite that. It's a great relief that you find it well written! Precisely chapter 14 will show more of how and why the thugs are the way they are, and I would very much like to know your opinion on whether their back story makes sense to you on that when it is ready (by the way ¡tu español es muy bueno, amigo!)
10/2/22, 10:15 PM
I need to find this Maze
10/2/22, 9:59 PM
Great Work Jeep!!!
Anonymous
10/2/22, 9:20 PM
Mmmf! Would love to see more of Dr Daddy and Tommy! Maybe Tommy's father is in need of a dentist's appointment?
10/2/22, 8:15 PM
Always loved this one!
10/2/22, 7:24 PM
I hope you plan to write more. I like what you have written so far.
JoeLv
10/2/22, 4:47 PM
Please more of Kyle being sexually used, particularly how his tight ass becomes very used and very loose. I love the idea of him being totally destroyed too. Hopefully T-bone finally gets Churry to give up trying to protect Kyle from total destruction. Like the caretaker thing for him because he's been so mentally destroyed. Hopefully it's written to be clear there's no way he can ever recover and his mental destruction is permanent. I kinda see him ending up in like a nursing home or a mental institution where he needs to be cared for and T-bone becoming his legal guatdian and in control of him completely. Finally would love to see T-bone and Churry bleed Kyle and his friends dry of all their finances. Keep up the good work!! Please go with total destruction of Kyle's mind!!!
10/2/22, 4:13 PM
Amazing story! Please keep it up! I think they should both shrink to as small as possible
10/2/22, 4:09 PM
Keep going! Transformation into big hairy bearded bears is my kink. The hairier the better, and the more you focus on facial hair the more it turns me on! Particularly if its not only full beards but all kinds of big bushy facial hair. Maybe once a person is infected the virus presents different symptoms in each guy, turning them into different types of bears or otters with different manifestations?….
Sep 20, 2022
10/2/22, 2:48 PM
I'd love to see an alternate ending where he looses control at the end and finishes the beans, sealing his fate as an obedient hog.

10/2/22, 3:20 PM
@NotDenisDuncan Haha, yes! I definitely thought about it as I was writing it. I don't think I'll be doing anything with it soon, but the idea is definitely there.