Recent Comments

7/16/25, 6:19 AM
dude.. this moved me. You've set the bar an order of magnitude higher with this one. This flows like a tone poem, dialogue and inner monologue taking us from image to image, reality to dream and back, every word a revelation, deeply affecting and compelling and profound. Seeing Gray and Archie as they are now, what they've become, hits all the right notes. They're becoming the C-3PO and R2-D2 of the Eden Academy saga, an anchor and a welcome presence whenever they appear. This is my new favorite Jack Parker story, this is you at your best and most powerful. Beautiful, inspiring work. Thank you.

7/16/25, 6:57 AM
@[HypnoMutt-1](/user/show/10023035) ❤️❤️❤️
7/16/25, 5:30 AM
Great story
Anonymous
7/16/25, 5:05 AM
Lovely, can't wait to see more
7/16/25, 4:51 AM
Wow great, but we want the POV of Matt
7/16/25, 4:25 AM
Wouldve been better withought the cage and nurse tbh.
7/13/25, 4:38 AM
Great story.

7/16/25, 3:34 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you for reading and for the feedback!
7/16/25, 2:00 AM
Please continue this series! I am loving it and it is stellar
7/15/25, 10:57 PM
Great story. Definitely a fantasy.
7/15/25, 10:55 PM
Not bad.