Recent Comments

Chase
10/1/22, 1:27 AM
Love that T-Bone is trying to really break him. So hoping for a really bad end for Kyle where T-Bone mostly gets his revenge. Also like the idea of him being to messed us he needs some kind of care taker. Hope his friends learn to treat him bad too.

10/2/22, 5:42 AM
@Chase Hi! The care taker suggestion is a good idea, there are different scenarios I would like to explore, but I'll definitely keep it in mind. About his friends and how they will treat him, I already have a very clear idea about one of them, but I still haven't fully decided about the other one! especially since the two options I have in mind offer fun possibilities. But I must decide soon, because I already have a good part writen and I'm slowly approaching the moment of making a decision! Thanks for comment, pal, your vote for a bad ending is on my list :wink:
9/19/22, 11:52 AM
I like it a lot! Everyone will have different tastes for how dark they like things to get (or what they find dark), but it's all been easy to read and pretty to my taste so far. Some additional drama as well as sexual content this chapter. I get the sense that Terry's guilty problem will end up getting taken care of in some way he didn't expect, but that's just a guess. With Terry and David added to the mix, there's possibilities for other endings where Kyle doesn't end up either just T-Bone and Chuy's slave, or totally back to how he was, but I don't have a very particular preference for how things work out.

10/2/22, 5:30 AM
@drummer Thanks, pal! Oh, now that it's left alone in the hands of the two punks, we'll see how long the sweet kind Terry can keep his little secret ha ha. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you continue to enjoy what's to come!
9/6/22, 3:46 AM
Love the story but wish the chapters or sections were longer. I would definitely wait more time if you want to make them longer!

9/6/22, 7:06 AM
@Hypnoguy12 The next few will definitely be longer! glad you enjoy :)

9/15/22, 2:53 AM
Hopefully you will be posting the next chapter soon right? @hypnoalec

9/16/22, 1:44 AM
@Hypnoguy12 working on it! just super busy at the moment lol. I'll try to make the wait worth it ;)

10/2/22, 3:22 AM
Any updates? Would love to read the next part! @hypnoalec
10/1/22, 10:58 PM
You know I think you are awesome. I loved this story. I think you were very creative. I liked the ending. More please.

10/2/22, 2:55 AM
@Steve Jones Must... hold back... joy... at... such... a... lovely comment.... to make... ...car pun... Thank you Steve! you really know how to *fuel* my self esteem.
10/2/22, 1:40 AM
This is so hot: the pacing is delicious, and the premise and your writing style are both excellent.
10/1/22, 11:35 PM
I live to serve the Virus
10/1/22, 11:25 PM
Would love an alternate ending where he falls. I loved the story though, well written and excitingly explicit. It just would be fun to see him totally corrupted and knowing his own failure, filled with unending despair trapped in lucifers power.
10/1/22, 11:20 PM
Wonderfully creative and fully realized, a perfect jumping on point to the TF world for anyone curious.
10/1/22, 10:55 PM
I’m not a big fan of most Halloween stories. This is a hot chapter regardless. It’s awesome to see what you have been working on. Waiting for chapter 3. Brad… entertaining as always.

10/1/22, 11:18 PM
@Steve Jones I have no idea what will happen next :rofl:
10/1/22, 10:51 PM
Wowza, I enjoyed this story. A completely different feel from your other works I hope you do a second chapter. The sex was awesome. I’ve never focused on pecs. Maybe I should. :)

10/1/22, 11:17 PM
@Steve Jones I'm so glad you liked it, I tried to do something short and less slow burn for a change.