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Aug 24, 2022
StatueLover
9/30/22, 1:37 PM
Love it. More.
9/30/22, 7:09 AM
A++ for originality and imagination!

9/30/22, 1:11 PM
@Fingrfethr Cheers dude, I do like me the creative side of fiction… oh I forgot to do a car pun… Ehh that’s for reading., your comment really *drives* me to keep writing.
9/30/22, 11:42 AM
With every chapter Iike you more and more. Who knew that a story about brainwashing could be so wholesome and safe? Very big like
Anonymous
9/30/22, 10:49 AM
I'm not a water sport guy but DAMN! that was hot!
Evan
9/29/22, 11:40 PM
I also have to call out "When you go gay in a dream you go gay in real life." Brilliant line. I also second the creative comment. I look forward to seeing just what these bros have gotten themselves into.

9/30/22, 9:50 AM
@Evan Thank you so much! I'm glad you've been enjoying it.
9/30/22, 5:15 AM
I loved it. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I'll be thinking about all the sweet little dicks ambling about in their tank for a while. It makes me wonder if there's in universe interest from people who want to keep dicks as pets in a home tank setup or if their longterm survival is dependent upon being attached to a host. I suppose I shall find out when I read the rest of your back catalogue.
9/29/22, 6:11 AM
I’m glad I finally got to reading this story! I can’t resist good cum inflation, and this was delicious.

9/30/22, 3:52 AM
@Soren Fitz haha, thank you! I really ought to indulge more often, given that it's my namesake lmao I'm still in the process of slowly cleaning up older stories to post here, so hopefully some of the others are to your taste too 💖 :P
9/30/22, 3:15 AM
I like the premise a lot, but as you said in the story preface, the story lacks a lot of the sort of detail which would make it really really hot. Good start, but I suggest you flesh this one out. For example, who really is this Roger character? How did he get started in this business? What happens to the slaves after delivery? i.e. Tell us about a customer or two. Flesh out the characters and background of the slaves. How close are the police getting? What is the chief detective like? Once fleshed out, I'll be begging for a continuation!
Evan
9/29/22, 11:51 PM
Super (haha) creative! Some nice tongue-in-cheek but still with a great plot and finally overcoming the formula. Fun and hot and an excellent entry into the Halloween contest!

9/30/22, 2:26 AM
@Evan Thanks for your kind praise! It's good to hear the balance of silly and serious worked for you!
9/30/22, 1:55 AM
Great! Second part, Please!