Recent Comments

9/30/22, 3:15 AM
I like the premise a lot, but as you said in the story preface, the story lacks a lot of the sort of detail which would make it really really hot. Good start, but I suggest you flesh this one out. For example, who really is this Roger character? How did he get started in this business? What happens to the slaves after delivery? i.e. Tell us about a customer or two. Flesh out the characters and background of the slaves. How close are the police getting? What is the chief detective like? Once fleshed out, I'll be begging for a continuation!
Evan
9/29/22, 11:51 PM
Super (haha) creative! Some nice tongue-in-cheek but still with a great plot and finally overcoming the formula. Fun and hot and an excellent entry into the Halloween contest!

9/30/22, 2:26 AM
@Evan Thanks for your kind praise! It's good to hear the balance of silly and serious worked for you!
9/30/22, 1:55 AM
Great! Second part, Please!
9/30/22, 1:52 AM
Loved this! My mind went so many places after the ending, especially with Harry and his boy!
9/30/22, 1:32 AM
I really like stories with these power dynamics, however I lack a lot of context of our protagonist, who he is and how he got to where he is, as well as the victims, I hope you develop them much more in the following publications
9/30/22, 12:48 AM
wow being converted into mindless drone is so outstanding. willl dream about it happening to me one day.
Evan
9/21/22, 1:02 PM
Loved this. I hope Robbie's affections can be properly returned some time. Great writing. Fun scenes and so very hot. Thank you.

9/29/22, 11:47 PM
@Evan Thank you for the comment, and I guess we'll have to see if anything romantic happens between Duke and Robbie.
mic
9/29/22, 11:40 PM
yeah super nice written, hot ideas, take everything from him but stay together , more cashrape contracts
mic
9/29/22, 11:14 PM
fucking hot, more cocksharing etc , super nice idea, trick him and other guys more, think some hotel guests could have spend some money and help him fuck himself
Evan
9/29/22, 11:06 PM
A fun entry. Really different approach, I wasn't sure where it was going to end up and I enjoyed the lack of sinister elements letting the uncontrolled horniness shine through.