Recent Comments

9/29/22, 10:08 PM
What a wonderful continuation to this story. The Halloween ambience is excellently installed, keep up the amazing work!

9/29/22, 10:12 PM
@Twan Andersen :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Tis the season to be spooky, and slutty!
9/29/22, 9:51 AM
Ha! This last sentence is simply irresistible. What a treat! And also: can’t wait for the Royal Bitch to get her comeuppance. She soooo deserves a nasty ending! Thanks 😊

9/29/22, 8:54 PM
@Yunnick Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. That sentence is the very reason why I split it in two, it was just too fun to pass up. As for RB, we'll see what's she's cooking soon enough.
9/29/22, 8:24 PM
Such a great sequel with a happy gay ending! The Bar's name made me chuckle hard, btw. Also, the question about gay levels was hilarious. Loved how confused Brad is and doesn't notice anything strange even as his outfit changes. Another Norismo masterpiece. Now Brad needs a daddy! :satisfied:

9/29/22, 8:43 PM
@Essex Yay! Now, will this story be 35 parts too? :satisfied:
9/29/22, 7:50 PM
Great beginning
9/29/22, 2:56 PM
I'm sorry if I suddenly got confused, did Mike and Jerome change names to the other?
Jimmy
9/29/22, 6:52 AM
God I hope there's a part three soon

9/29/22, 9:20 AM
hello @Jimmy as the other comments may have clued you in since people keep stealing my shit i'm done writing for free sites. this fucking sucks donkey dick but it can't be helped. thanks for the love and support! this story would have had the most ballsy ending reveal of anything i've ever written.

Jimmy
9/29/22, 2:20 PM
@Daisy I. B. de Melcker I completely understand. We'd all be there if you did release on a non-paid site. I think you story really gets a lot of people's headspaces. Regardless though I hope you find some way to continue writing and receive the right level of respect for your work
9/29/22, 1:20 PM
WOW - this was just a great experience. It was so dark but ... i really enjoyed it. The writing really captured me. I loved it. I wlll read everything you write!
9/29/22, 12:58 PM
Interesting. Can't wait to read more.

9/29/22, 1:04 PM
@Jonanator Thanks! I'll be back to this one soon.
9/29/22, 1:00 PM
Will there be another chapter?
Anonymous
9/29/22, 12:15 PM
Great to see you back with another chapter! Really enjoying your approach to things, with the slight shifts in the medium each time. It keeps things feeling fresh, but with a lot of similar beats to the protagonist’s eventual downfall. Personally was a big fan of the “trapped in VR” angle you took with this one. Whether you stick with this or go somewhere else for the next chapter, consider me hooked! ;)

9/29/22, 12:58 PM
@ Cheers! Glad you enjoyed it! I'll probably revisit this idea in a different story at some point, but for this setting I'm going to keep hopping mediums. Already know where we're going next, but I'm going to explore some other stories first.