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9/29/22, 12:58 PM
Interesting. Can't wait to read more.

9/29/22, 1:04 PM
@Jonanator Thanks! I'll be back to this one soon.
9/29/22, 1:00 PM
Will there be another chapter?
Anonymous
9/29/22, 12:15 PM
Great to see you back with another chapter! Really enjoying your approach to things, with the slight shifts in the medium each time. It keeps things feeling fresh, but with a lot of similar beats to the protagonist’s eventual downfall. Personally was a big fan of the “trapped in VR” angle you took with this one. Whether you stick with this or go somewhere else for the next chapter, consider me hooked! ;)

9/29/22, 12:58 PM
@ Cheers! Glad you enjoyed it! I'll probably revisit this idea in a different story at some point, but for this setting I'm going to keep hopping mediums. Already know where we're going next, but I'm going to explore some other stories first.
9/29/22, 12:58 PM
Love the story. I so want to be Trevor. Can’t wait for the next episode. I like the idea of Omar eventually becoming his Dom after Liam trains him to be that.
9/11/22, 6:01 PM
So... It's been almost a year now. I don't suppose we'll see anymore updates on this story? Such a shame... 😞

Anonymous
9/29/22, 11:22 AM
@HypnoSlaveDude Aye. I check back once or twice a month hoping to see a new chapter.
9/29/22, 10:41 AM
As a non-gamer, I had a bit of a hard time getting into this one. Maybe it would have helped if the game itself progressively became more sexualized (for instance, if we went from fully armored knights to shirtless knights to knights in loincloths to naked knights as the levels progressed). But I did really like all the stuff with Wyatt getting hypnotized by the spiral loading screen and hearing his own voice proclaim his submission.

9/29/22, 11:02 AM
@Hypnothrill Yeah, I was afraid of that. Thanks for sticking with it, though! I think this one is going to be a bit marmite-y. But, you're right; it might have helped sexualizing things as the game progressed, but I was intending to keep Wyatt as much in the dark about his weakening resistance as possible.
Anonymous
9/29/22, 4:17 AM
Wait, no Futurama references? I almost feel cheated! Almost, but this is way better than some Futurama fanfic would've been!

9/29/22, 10:58 AM
@Anonymous Not that I don’t love Futurama. I just wanted to take my lore down a different *road*.
Cage Wearer
9/29/22, 10:47 AM
I loved the whole series, from start to finish, so Good
EntrancedGay92
9/28/22, 8:40 PM
I like this chapter a lot because we've likely all been in Trevor's shoes before. Though my recurring fantasy of my husband getting hypnotized with me knowing it kicked in when Omar started repeating some of the language Liam used on Trevor. Maybe Liam's sister wasn't in town after all. :smiling_imp:

9/29/22, 10:18 AM
@EntrancedGay92 I like the way you think. I love the idea of Omar getting into the recruit conditioning after seeing the changes in Trevor. Working with Liam secretly to become a recruit too, building up to be a big reveal later. I definitely don't think it would be a non-consensual thing, looking at Happy Endings' other stories I can't see Liam forcibly brainwashing Omar.
Anonymous
9/29/22, 9:35 AM
I love this series so much