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Anonymous
4/11/25, 3:18 PM
Very hot! Can’t wait for the next chapter
4/11/25, 1:03 AM
This was such a great story! Simon was such a perfect character to lust for. I loved the surprise Simon kiss in the middle of it all. Looking forward to anything you put forward in the future.

4/11/25, 3:03 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thanks, I like the idea that he was swept up in lust and used his own, true free will in that moment. Maybe he isn’t as straight as he thinks lol
4/11/25, 10:12 AM
A very good start. I hope you will continue this.

4/11/25, 11:40 AM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Glad you enjoyed the first chapter, that means a lot coming from you! I’m definitely planning to continue, chapter 2 is already in the works! :)

4/11/25, 2:26 PM
@[Nothingville](/user/show/1356823) Excellent news! You've built up a very intriguing and erotic situation between Joe and Logan. I'm looking forward to what happens next.
4/11/25, 2:22 PM
I still come back to and think about this story often. Undoubtedly one of the best first chapters I've read on here. Hope your health problems haven't been giving you too much trouble
4/11/25, 11:49 AM
Wonderful 😋
4/11/25, 10:40 AM
to what extent is this story AI assisted? how much AI was used in the process of working on this story?

4/11/25, 11:41 AM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) Hi Jules! The story and characters are entirely my own as I came up with the concept and direction myself. I use AI to help refine the writing and smooth things out here and there, especially since English isn’t my first language. But I can assure you the heart and creative vision are all mine. Hope you enjoy the story as much as I enjoy creating it!
4/11/25, 7:25 AM
Amazing story
4/11/25, 5:26 AM
Good chapter! Thanks! i really appreciate your understanding of Dom/sub relationships and their development. I thought the section in which Mark was in need of caring and discussion about his roles, responsibilities, and Steve's thoughts on his performance as a Dom was realistic. It was perhaps something not all readers will have necessarily thought about. I think it lends authenticity to your knowledge and your story.
4/11/25, 4:35 AM
@Henry Wolf i apologize if i seemed too hard on you in the comments of the previous chapter. My criticism was in fact not directed at you at all; you just got caught in the crossfire. Perhaps your portrayal of Stan and his mean and manipulative nature was too good; just as likely my reaction was overly sensitive and reactive. Keep in mind that the political situation now is substantially different than when you wrote the last chapter, and admittedly I am very stressed about the state of the world. I have no tolerance for characters like Stan, and clearly there are a lot of real people with similar characteristics and lots of others willing to overlook their reprehensible behavior even as it hurts others. That all said (& done now) i would be remiss if I didn't say how much i am again enjoying Steve's growing submissiveness and the power shift between Mark and Steve.
4/11/25, 4:18 AM
Love these stories!!