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9/26/22, 12:54 PM
This was so hot. so steamy. i loved the wet dream.
9/26/22, 11:29 AM
Love the pace and how things slowly develop over time (and from one part to the next). A few slight changes and I could mistake it for a fantasy I've used to arouse myself in the past. Glad there's a couple more parts to read now and hope that there's more from this writer in the future.
9/21/22, 9:52 AM
I really enjoyed this one a lot, especially once the 19 year old skater boys entered the story. But I think I would have preferred it without the epilogue (amusing as it is) simply because I'd prefer to retain the mystery of why the neighbors put this special candy in the bag. (Maybe they're wizards seeking to queer the neighborhood!)

Anonymous
9/23/22, 12:04 AM
@Hypnothrill Crazy enough, I actually really enjoyed it WITH the epilogue and thought it made it a better piece! Mostly because of the humor of it, admittedly. The completely boring mundane answers of "Drug was made because jobs made the husbands too tired for sex" and "Fuck fuck fuck fuck shit I don't have candy left and it's only 9:00 why are there so many kids this year?!?!?!?" just made me laugh.

9/26/22, 11:11 AM
Fully agree, actually! Usually the mystery is nice but in this case it tied up a loose end and left everything in a neat little bow.
9/26/22, 10:32 AM
Turning him into the real Superman and having him completely controlled would be hot. Some more superheroes added to the mix would be neat too.
9/26/22, 10:15 AM
Loved it
mic
9/26/22, 7:44 AM
love it, please more, more from twink, more cashrape, chasity, love your story, so hot written
9/26/22, 6:55 AM
Can’t wait for part 2!
Anonymous
9/26/22, 6:43 AM
Great story. I hope that you continue it.
9/26/22, 3:30 AM
Oh! Also i love the plot device of it being for a youtube channel. Just the way the reviewer’s story was structured like a review. Really really good. It adds a real world dynamism.

9/26/22, 5:49 AM
@whiteteethteen Thanks for the kind words! I really appreciate it! Based on the ratings, I kind of suspect my stuff has a bit of a niche audience, even for here, but it appears those who are into it are really into it! Always gratifying to find like minds! Thank you for reading!
9/26/22, 5:34 AM
typo in the description?