Recent Comments

4/11/25, 4:46 PM
Love it!

4/12/25, 2:25 AM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thanks Kelly!
4/11/25, 4:00 PM
Can't wait for more. Very hot.

4/12/25, 2:25 AM
@Jonanator Glad you think so!
4/12/25, 2:20 AM
This story just keeps getting hotter and hotter.
Anonymous
4/12/25, 2:19 AM
The story is great. The writing sucks. I still read it, but hopefully your next chapter will go through some editing.
4/12/25, 1:38 AM
I hope some of the readers make a comment on my story
4/11/25, 2:46 PM
This story is so fun! Ramses as a name is a bit icky, pretty sure that's not really a name anyone uses in the modern day and it feels a bit (hopefully unintentionally) racist. But the dynamic between the characters and the whole worldbuilding and concept are great. I know it's been quite a while but I would love if this eventually continued.

4/12/25, 12:58 AM
@[Beny](/user/show/914767) Absolutely not intended to be offensive!! I'm aware it's an uncommon name, and he was named that for a reason in-universe. I hope it has not come off negatively as that was definitely not my intent! Thank you for commenting though; life does get in the way of writing but appreciation like this makes me want to continue. I'll see if I get some time!
4/11/25, 11:39 PM
WOW so amazing and very original. Please keep writing this story. Incredible concept.
4/11/25, 10:15 PM
Looking forward to more. This was disturbing but erotic.
4/11/25, 10:00 PM
More please!
Zander
4/11/25, 7:47 PM
Great story, but I would like to know how it all started?