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9/21/22, 9:52 AM
I really enjoyed this one a lot, especially once the 19 year old skater boys entered the story. But I think I would have preferred it without the epilogue (amusing as it is) simply because I'd prefer to retain the mystery of why the neighbors put this special candy in the bag. (Maybe they're wizards seeking to queer the neighborhood!)

Anonymous
9/23/22, 12:04 AM
@Hypnothrill Crazy enough, I actually really enjoyed it WITH the epilogue and thought it made it a better piece! Mostly because of the humor of it, admittedly. The completely boring mundane answers of "Drug was made because jobs made the husbands too tired for sex" and "Fuck fuck fuck fuck shit I don't have candy left and it's only 9:00 why are there so many kids this year?!?!?!?" just made me laugh.

9/26/22, 11:11 AM
Fully agree, actually! Usually the mystery is nice but in this case it tied up a loose end and left everything in a neat little bow.
9/26/22, 10:32 AM
Turning him into the real Superman and having him completely controlled would be hot. Some more superheroes added to the mix would be neat too.
9/26/22, 10:15 AM
Loved it
mic
9/26/22, 7:44 AM
love it, please more, more from twink, more cashrape, chasity, love your story, so hot written
9/26/22, 6:55 AM
Can’t wait for part 2!
Anonymous
9/26/22, 6:43 AM
Great story. I hope that you continue it.
9/26/22, 3:30 AM
Oh! Also i love the plot device of it being for a youtube channel. Just the way the reviewer’s story was structured like a review. Really really good. It adds a real world dynamism.

9/26/22, 5:49 AM
@whiteteethteen Thanks for the kind words! I really appreciate it! Based on the ratings, I kind of suspect my stuff has a bit of a niche audience, even for here, but it appears those who are into it are really into it! Always gratifying to find like minds! Thank you for reading!
9/26/22, 5:34 AM
typo in the description?
9/26/22, 4:06 AM
Excellent story!!
9/26/22, 2:52 AM
You are an exceptional writer, and you totally have honed in on the charm of hypnosis for most of us and made it something of total fantasy. I love the general tone of this, it's not deviously dark. It has a lightness, and kinkiness that are rare to be found together. I love how your mind plots these out. It's very in sync to what I wish would happen to me, so it's very gratifying to read it becoming realised in stories.