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9/26/22, 10:32 AM
Turning him into the real Superman and having him completely controlled would be hot. Some more superheroes added to the mix would be neat too.
9/26/22, 10:15 AM
Loved it
mic
9/26/22, 7:44 AM
love it, please more, more from twink, more cashrape, chasity, love your story, so hot written
9/26/22, 6:55 AM
Can’t wait for part 2!
Anonymous
9/26/22, 6:43 AM
Great story. I hope that you continue it.
9/26/22, 3:30 AM
Oh! Also i love the plot device of it being for a youtube channel. Just the way the reviewer’s story was structured like a review. Really really good. It adds a real world dynamism.

9/26/22, 5:49 AM
@whiteteethteen Thanks for the kind words! I really appreciate it! Based on the ratings, I kind of suspect my stuff has a bit of a niche audience, even for here, but it appears those who are into it are really into it! Always gratifying to find like minds! Thank you for reading!
9/26/22, 5:34 AM
typo in the description?
9/26/22, 4:06 AM
Excellent story!!
9/26/22, 2:52 AM
You are an exceptional writer, and you totally have honed in on the charm of hypnosis for most of us and made it something of total fantasy. I love the general tone of this, it's not deviously dark. It has a lightness, and kinkiness that are rare to be found together. I love how your mind plots these out. It's very in sync to what I wish would happen to me, so it's very gratifying to read it becoming realised in stories.
3/7/21, 10:27 PM
You should totally do more.

Anonymous
9/26/22, 2:45 AM
@Jonanatory