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Anonymous
9/25/22, 10:10 PM
Any idea if or when you will publish the next chapter ?
9/25/22, 9:43 PM
Wow! A great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens to the hero next!
9/25/22, 9:29 PM
Had to stop halfway through at the moment he ditched Mike.. that point just killed any arousal for me that the rest of the story could cause. Cause I could relate a bit too well with Mike who seemed like a genuine good guy, trying his best to somehow fix the relationship while not understanding why its breaking apart. It made me dislike the son and step-dad too much to really enjoy the rest of it.
9/25/22, 6:20 PM
I definitely enjoyed it. For me, it read more based out of the ranger shows than the sentai shows. The sentai shows I've seen really do have complex plots where there are risks and conflicts, betrayals, and serious plot development; the Power Ranges reduced most of that down to the very formulaic aspects for the American audience and to make money. Also, the Power Rangers bring all the sentai shows together under one heading and subdivide as they see fit; the sentai shows themselves only last a year and do as much as they can to work out a storyline in that time frame. There are storylines in the sentai shows that definitely fit into this (the whole turning people into vampires only to have them walk into the sun and burn storyline in Magirangers has been a big pet peeve of mine) and those I read into this, but I think more of the Power Ranger storylines came to mind when I read this.

9/25/22, 7:02 PM
@New Guy in Town Yeah, I know what you mean. It's more directly a parody of rangers rather than the sentai they are based on. Even the younger teams of sentai, like Megaranger, have much more adult themes. That said they still provide the core of the more silly tropes that make the western version so endearing.
9/24/22, 8:35 PM
Hot chapter as always! I'll be read whatever you are writing so don't mind jumping between stories. Just an idea, I would love to see when the app is in the hand of other users, someone who may have less moral code than John and use the app for pure lust / pleasure purposes. Love to see innocent men in kinky humiliating or embarrassing situations under the app :)

9/25/22, 6:31 PM
@starvagon123 that's an idea I had been tossing around, others using the app. The problem with someone without a moral code is where is the conflict? The app is so powerful it could eliminate any conflict with a few button presses. So there has to be something limiting it's use.
9/24/22, 5:56 PM
So hot!! Your writing is delicious, and I'll be happy to read whatever your inspiration leads you to write! šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

9/25/22, 6:29 PM
@NeedControlling thank you! I might try writing some other stories and see how that goes, but if it's distracting I might just focus on this one for now.
9/24/22, 3:18 PM
Love your writing!

9/25/22, 6:27 PM
@Kelly thank you!
9/24/22, 12:47 PM
I’m okay with you jumping from story to story but I’m am looking forward to to seeing what happens with Sam & Joe.

9/25/22, 6:27 PM
@SirDive started on the next chapter and we get a little time with Joe and a little time with Sam. But it seems easier for me to write Joe's section so we might stick with him for a bit.
9/24/22, 9:52 AM
I really liked the Sam segment. His newfound live for exposure is HOT I wouldn't mind if you jump from story to story if you feel inspired to write whatever cones to your mind

9/25/22, 6:26 PM
@ForgottenCradle thanks, I might give it a try, my only worry is I'd get caught up in other stories and this one might suffer for it. But I won't really know till I try.
Iriefal
9/24/22, 6:58 AM
In your place I would focus on this story, but write the stuff you find hot for other story when the idea hit you. And in case you got a block in writing this story just change to the other for a while to recharge. Btw, I like the way he goes with the app, not changing himself and not using the power to abuse Sam (to much)

9/25/22, 6:25 PM
@Iriefal I've been making notes about ideas for other stories as they come to me, but not fleshing them out. I might give this a try or do like a collection of single chapter stories about random guys John meets if I get writers block on this one.