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9/24/22, 8:35 PM
Hot chapter as always! I'll be read whatever you are writing so don't mind jumping between stories. Just an idea, I would love to see when the app is in the hand of other users, someone who may have less moral code than John and use the app for pure lust / pleasure purposes. Love to see innocent men in kinky humiliating or embarrassing situations under the app :)

9/25/22, 6:31 PM
@starvagon123 that's an idea I had been tossing around, others using the app. The problem with someone without a moral code is where is the conflict? The app is so powerful it could eliminate any conflict with a few button presses. So there has to be something limiting it's use.
9/24/22, 5:56 PM
So hot!! Your writing is delicious, and I'll be happy to read whatever your inspiration leads you to write! 😛😛😛

9/25/22, 6:29 PM
@NeedControlling thank you! I might try writing some other stories and see how that goes, but if it's distracting I might just focus on this one for now.
9/24/22, 3:18 PM
Love your writing!

9/25/22, 6:27 PM
@Kelly thank you!
9/24/22, 12:47 PM
I’m okay with you jumping from story to story but I’m am looking forward to to seeing what happens with Sam & Joe.

9/25/22, 6:27 PM
@SirDive started on the next chapter and we get a little time with Joe and a little time with Sam. But it seems easier for me to write Joe's section so we might stick with him for a bit.
9/24/22, 9:52 AM
I really liked the Sam segment. His newfound live for exposure is HOT I wouldn't mind if you jump from story to story if you feel inspired to write whatever cones to your mind

9/25/22, 6:26 PM
@ForgottenCradle thanks, I might give it a try, my only worry is I'd get caught up in other stories and this one might suffer for it. But I won't really know till I try.
Iriefal
9/24/22, 6:58 AM
In your place I would focus on this story, but write the stuff you find hot for other story when the idea hit you. And in case you got a block in writing this story just change to the other for a while to recharge. Btw, I like the way he goes with the app, not changing himself and not using the power to abuse Sam (to much)

9/25/22, 6:25 PM
@Iriefal I've been making notes about ideas for other stories as they come to me, but not fleshing them out. I might give this a try or do like a collection of single chapter stories about random guys John meets if I get writers block on this one.
9/25/22, 6:08 PM
I'd love to see where it goes
9/25/22, 4:20 PM
I literally read this entire well-written chapter with a full erection - that oasis opening was the most erotic writing I have ever read on this site. Also, I loved the ambiguity of the ending....but I too would love that alternate ending. For example, maybe a fully corrupted Jesus transforms innocent Uriel into heaven's version of Armond Rizzo or someone similar. The possibilities are endless, but definitely let "Jesus" really corrupt smug Michael and Gabriel!
Kybal Lutra
9/25/22, 4:12 PM
Have loved this story since it came out! Any chance you’ve got part 3 coming soon?
9/25/22, 4:03 PM
What can I say that wasn’t already said ? Your open ended ending is perfect for a continuation with a spin-off series or even just let the reader imagination do the work. Having said that, a definitive conclusion would have better served with a closed ending and I will add my personal preference for the corruption ending. An alternate ending chapter would allow you to satisfy both those solutions.