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9/24/22, 9:13 PM
So glad you’re back! This chapter has set up so many possibilities. Can’t wait to see where it goes!
9/24/22, 7:53 PM
Fuck yeah ! Another hot story for Goodtime! Hope this becomes a series :Q Thanks so much for writing
9/24/22, 6:00 AM
I really wanted to see Jason explore his bottom side. Here’s hoping for a part 2! Great story.

9/24/22, 7:50 PM
@Mrdick Thanks for the props. Jason’s a total top though, there’s no part two coming.
X
9/24/22, 5:17 AM
I have been waiting SO damn long to finally read another story of Daddy getting fked. Great work!

9/24/22, 7:49 PM
@X Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
9/24/22, 2:06 AM
This is surprisingly wholesome, since its just a father trying to protect his son... until it spirals out of control and causes its own issues. I also spent the whole time wondering when we'd get your signature muscle growth/dumbing down/himbofication, so that ending was very much "ah, THERE we go".

9/24/22, 7:48 PM
Thank you @BlindSeer0! When I started plotting this one out I was thinking of a story where a guy goes back to his small town and he’s the only gay guy there. I started writing the scene at the airport and realized that it wasn’t really a story about Jason — it’s about Dan trying to do his best. As for the ending… yeah, that wasn’t in the plot outline, but I couldn’t resist a couple paragraphs ;)
9/24/22, 1:54 AM
this is incredibly cute, I don't usually say this but I'm hoping that ending was leading into a part 2

9/24/22, 7:45 PM
@Tkhon I’m sorry to say there won’t be a part two — I just don’t think a continuation would have the same spark. This isn’t normally one I would have written, but once Dan popped into my head, it was impossible to avoid giving him more substance.
9/23/22, 5:50 PM
Great stuff! Now I want to reread the beginning and see if I can pinpoint exactly where Dan's whole subliminal programming plan starts to go awry.

9/24/22, 7:44 PM
Thanks @Hypnothrill! I’d be curious where you see the moment it starts to go wrong - I planted a bunch of little hints, but like all slippery slopes it’s hard to see the moment we go into free fall.
Anonymous
9/23/22, 2:50 PM
Excellent work Thanks!!

9/24/22, 7:42 PM
Thank ye’ sir!
9/23/22, 10:37 AM
I love a good supportive dad. :grin:

9/24/22, 7:42 PM
@Norismo Though it definitely gets out of control, I really love Dan’s intentions.
Art
9/24/22, 7:31 PM
Another great story with Superboy's downfall. It is great when red K is involved as anything can happen. He has definitely met his match with Theo; and probably his friends and eventually his brother back from prison - where we know he has learned some tricks!