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Haruspex
9/22/22, 11:57 PM
I feel like you would REALLY enjoy the Always Hard fetish on metabods/the fetish as a concept. It's kinda just what it sounds like--dude's cock is Always Hard (and generally also he's always horny/wanting to cum/way more production etc etc, but not always). It's also pretty common to make it a Transformation element (didn't used to be that way > is now, having to deal with the side effects). Dunno. Call me crazy, call me wrong, call me being weirdly forward. But this story had some aspects that really made me consider I might wanna let you know that that is like, an actual fetish fetish that guys are lookin' for if you wanna write it.

9/23/22, 4:13 PM
@Haruspex I love this idea thank you for saying! I will definitely consider ;)
Anonymous
9/22/22, 9:37 PM
This is so hot! Can't wait for a part 2! If if you're looking for future transformations how about an average, straight, white guy transforms into a gay, cocky, dom, top Arab jock with an insatiable cock? And he needs to breed and turn other guys into sub Arab jocks with bubble butts and needy holes. Maybe some stuff about Arabs being superior and stuff. Idk if this is up your alley, whatever you feel like doing of course

9/23/22, 4:12 PM
@ Thank you so much I love this idea! I’ll definitely think about it. Glad you like the story as well
9/23/22, 8:08 AM
Where can I get this kind of poppers (and Liam's phone number if we're on the subject)? I once again commend you on writing a very immersive experience on the one hand yet completely safe with a responsible and caring Dom. Can't wait for chapter five!
9/23/22, 6:23 AM
This reminds my compulsory military service many years ago. I felt so bad because I knew I am not suitable for military. One day a sergeant ask us “don’t you think the life in army is so easier than outside? Your superior give orders and all you have to do is complying. No need to think. Training is like sports class every day, no writing exam. We also provide you food and bed, so you won’t spend much money. Isn’t it great!?” And I suddenly felt he was correct. Every night I slept, I touch my crew cut head and felt so good to be here, almost wanted to join the volunteer service . I think the sergeant really did something about hypnosis or brainwashing. Just not long enough to completely converted me.
9/23/22, 5:49 AM
Awwww, superslut wants to be collared more. Can't wait to read more.
9/23/22, 5:17 AM
Absolutely fantastic
9/17/22, 7:48 PM
This is the hottest story I have read on this site in a while. Can wait to read more.

Arachnus
9/23/22, 5:01 AM
@gaygeek Thanks, I won't make you wait long. Planning at least 2-3 more parts.
9/17/22, 3:05 PM
Cum inflation and mpreg? Gods and temples? You know just how to turn me on!

Arachnus
9/23/22, 5:01 AM
@Soren Fitz Expect more.. oh, and I appreciate those things from you, too.
9/23/22, 4:50 AM
Love the story and the subtle mind control. Best of all was how Dad just read the paper while dealing with his Boys! That's how a Dad should run his house! Thanks for the super hot story... more please!
9/23/22, 2:18 AM
Echoing what's already been said, I'm really enjoying how grounded this story is. The slightly mundane setting and the way the characters all seem to react and behave "normally" really make it so much more immersive. There is an excellent sense of realism throughout that really enhances the suspension of disbelief whenever the more fantasy elements pop up. The conditioning method is so unique in its subtlety compared to so many other brainwashing stories that it keeps drawing me back in just to see where the story will go next. Can't wait for the next chapter.