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9/23/22, 11:56 PM
Oh man please continue this series, or reboot it as something similar. I come back to re-read it all the time, its so hot.
9/23/22, 8:50 PM
I'm enjoying this story. The body distortion from getting fucked is not something I see much, combined with the shrinking was very hot! I love when they team up on Dan and he ends up cumming while shrunk and skewered on cock. I also liked when they teamed up on Kevin in the last chapter. The extreme body shrinking stuff (e.g. getting small enough to fit in underwear, or to fuck a urethra, or go inside an asshole) is not really something I'm very into but it didn't set me off track. If you're open to constructive criticism, I think the story could benefit from clearer pacing and a more central progression and focus. I like when stories have a clear progression, to a strong climax (or maybe a couple) and resolution (that, for a story like this, probably ends with one or all of the guys becoming permanent, happy sluts). This story seemed to wander a bit. The closest thing to a climax for me was Dan shrinking and cumming while skewered like a pig on a roast. But that didn't seem like a central climax to the story but rather a hot graphic that I particularly liked. Then, there is not really a resolution since we don't find out what change was permanent - we get that Dan is stuck in underwear for at least 4 hours, and Kevin is humiliated since his photos were shared on social media, but otherwise it doesn't seem like these guys lives are changed beyond this night. I would have enjoyed more humiliation - e.g. since everyone thinks Kevin has a small dick and was bukkaked, as per the rules of the game, his small dick can't be reversed and he has to be an obvious slut, in order to keep the game a secret. Overall great story, got me very riled up. Scratched some itches, and found a couple new ones!
9/23/22, 8:18 PM
Another great story! Love these superboy stories so much!!
Anonymous
9/23/22, 6:48 PM
Thank you for returning!! Would love for Van to do some sick shit with an entire family, or perhaps faculty
9/23/22, 6:14 PM
Great story! If you're looking for other words to describe "gay voice" a good one is "sibilance," which refers to heavily leaning on 's' sounds.
StatueLover
9/23/22, 5:27 PM
Really liked the induction and hypno parts. Would love to see the trick in a museum. 😝
9/22/22, 5:18 AM
Loved it!

9/23/22, 5:16 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thank you. I am so glad you liked it ^_^
Anonymous
9/23/22, 1:16 PM
Omg, what an arousing story 💦

9/23/22, 4:15 PM
@ Thank you!
Anonymous
9/23/22, 1:17 PM
Hot! Love a good transformation story where the guy changes into the complete opposite of what he was.

9/23/22, 4:15 PM
@ Thank you!
Haruspex
9/22/22, 11:57 PM
I feel like you would REALLY enjoy the Always Hard fetish on metabods/the fetish as a concept. It's kinda just what it sounds like--dude's cock is Always Hard (and generally also he's always horny/wanting to cum/way more production etc etc, but not always). It's also pretty common to make it a Transformation element (didn't used to be that way > is now, having to deal with the side effects). Dunno. Call me crazy, call me wrong, call me being weirdly forward. But this story had some aspects that really made me consider I might wanna let you know that that is like, an actual fetish fetish that guys are lookin' for if you wanna write it.

9/23/22, 4:13 PM
@Haruspex I love this idea thank you for saying! I will definitely consider ;)