Recent Comments

9/17/22, 3:05 PM
Cum inflation and mpreg? Gods and temples? You know just how to turn me on!

Arachnus
9/23/22, 5:01 AM
@Soren Fitz Expect more.. oh, and I appreciate those things from you, too.
9/23/22, 4:50 AM
Love the story and the subtle mind control. Best of all was how Dad just read the paper while dealing with his Boys! That's how a Dad should run his house! Thanks for the super hot story... more please!
9/23/22, 2:18 AM
Echoing what's already been said, I'm really enjoying how grounded this story is. The slightly mundane setting and the way the characters all seem to react and behave "normally" really make it so much more immersive. There is an excellent sense of realism throughout that really enhances the suspension of disbelief whenever the more fantasy elements pop up. The conditioning method is so unique in its subtlety compared to so many other brainwashing stories that it keeps drawing me back in just to see where the story will go next. Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/23/22, 12:52 AM
I have been enjoying this story; it's right up my alley of military and hypnosis. Like BlindSeer, I love how you ground the story in a realistic place and the characters are enjoyable (especially Hartman). And the conditioning was so different and yet apropos to the story which helps to make it stand apart from other stories. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
9/23/22, 12:26 AM
Superboy is now stuck, Super he is, but will he be Superslut?
Anonymous
9/22/22, 10:35 PM
Muy buena de verdad creo que el único problema es el tema de los diálogos estos no están entre comillas ni nada que los diferencie del resto del texto
9/22/22, 10:15 PM
Gosh I wish this would continue. This was perfect
9/22/22, 8:24 PM
When you go gay in a dream you go gay in real life, everyone knows that. Cheers Norismo for a sensual first chapter! Will be here for the rest for sure.

9/22/22, 8:26 PM
@Essex I'm glad you liked it! Now I just have to figure out what to do next. Gay sluts :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
FuckIt'A.Sunday
9/22/22, 8:11 PM
Love this every time it pops up! And now Carson's in it too! Exciting
9/22/22, 7:48 PM
Reading my line, “I’m done, you can go.” ugh! I almost feel something for poor Clark. Then I got over it. Well done, Jack. I loved part 2. Clark being a slut is good for him. It's a wonderful twist on his heroism from the first chapter. A man who can save everyone but himself. Theo is a great character. I hope we get more of him in the future. Sadly, we all know a Clark, a friend who has joined a long list of guys waiting on a man to respond to his text.