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9/23/22, 5:50 PM
Great stuff! Now I want to reread the beginning and see if I can pinpoint exactly where Dan's whole subliminal programming plan starts to go awry.

9/24/22, 7:44 PM
Thanks @Hypnothrill! I’d be curious where you see the moment it starts to go wrong - I planted a bunch of little hints, but like all slippery slopes it’s hard to see the moment we go into free fall.
Anonymous
9/23/22, 2:50 PM
Excellent work Thanks!!

9/24/22, 7:42 PM
Thank ye’ sir!
9/23/22, 10:37 AM
I love a good supportive dad. :grin:

9/24/22, 7:42 PM
@Norismo Though it definitely gets out of control, I really love Dan’s intentions.
Art
9/24/22, 7:31 PM
Another great story with Superboy's downfall. It is great when red K is involved as anything can happen. He has definitely met his match with Theo; and probably his friends and eventually his brother back from prison - where we know he has learned some tricks!
9/24/22, 5:37 AM
What an amazing chapter! I was expect more a silly parody, but this is exquisitely written--amazing references to "Elm Street," and the ending is absolutely hilarious (and also very sweet--our man Brad isn't a homophobe at all). Can't wait to see what happens next!

9/24/22, 5:57 PM
@Feed Your Head That's very kind of you to say. Thank you :blush:
9/24/22, 5:04 PM
What a great start, man! I like everything you presented on this chapter, Captain Haslett have a very nice, respectable and ordered life, I can't wait to see how Master turns everything upside down.
Anonymous
9/24/22, 4:38 PM
@GoodTime Welcome back! I love to read your story especially the story about mindfuck in family.
Elm
9/24/22, 3:19 PM
Awesome story as always! Love your style!
mbblover
9/24/22, 1:33 PM
great story... I was thinking perhaps another different story would be superman (the grown man, not superboy) a 6'6 375 pounds of rockhard musclebound hairy bodied (think the fantastic artwork creation of david blue eyed beast available on the internet)... who is brainwashed/drugged and captured, conquered and converted by a old bony gay teacher and his young students!.. superman goes to this school on the weekend to give a speech about duty and honor and what not and the old teacher somehow does whatever to make superman not only gay but a lover of of the young.... superman services them and they him as the young students are "in on it" the devious wicked plan of their old teacher who they also have had "relations" with beforehand... superman struggles at first with the brainwashing/drugging, hating himself at these strange perverse so wrong feelings, emotions of disgust, hate, fear, shame and so on, until eventually the wicked plan is too much for him to overcome in his brain and he succumbs and becomes a willing participant. the ultimate alpha male 100% straight is now been forever converted. Superman is "allowed" to go back to his normal clark kent career and superman career, but a addiction and fix is now forever in his brain to NEED to be with these youngsters under the kinky pervy eye of the old teacher's delight! the ultimate power trip conversion of all time and all by a old man and his young students!..
9/24/22, 1:14 PM
Hoo! Some _super_ hot worldbuilding here—the dripping oil, the “too much cum builds up inside you,” little details like that get me going. I’m not much for mind control as you can probably tell from my stories so the mind breaking element doesn’t do anything for me, but otherwise I’m just enthralled.