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FuckIt'A.Sunday
9/22/22, 8:11 PM
Love this every time it pops up! And now Carson's in it too! Exciting
9/22/22, 7:48 PM
Reading my line, “I’m done, you can go.” ugh! I almost feel something for poor Clark. Then I got over it. Well done, Jack. I loved part 2. Clark being a slut is good for him. It's a wonderful twist on his heroism from the first chapter. A man who can save everyone but himself. Theo is a great character. I hope we get more of him in the future. Sadly, we all know a Clark, a friend who has joined a long list of guys waiting on a man to respond to his text.
9/22/22, 7:36 PM
oh so hot. especially as he needs to beg for his collar.
9/22/22, 7:32 PM
This is wonderful! I made up a huge elaborate fantasy about kidnapped boys getting hypnotically conditioned into a paramilitary group before I'd ever had my first wet orgasm (and eventually leading to it, come to think of it), so this _really_ hits close to home. The way you're making it into an aboveboard consensual situation makes it even better. Can't wait to read more!
9/22/22, 7:29 PM
Very hot chapter. I enjoy how grounded in reality it feels, which really sets it apart from a lot of similar stories. I have absolutely no real life familiarity with poppers, their effects or how to use them safely, but because everything else seems so realistic it's much easier to accept what's going on regardless.
9/22/22, 6:42 PM
Can’t believe this has been over 4 years in the making. Definitely worth the wait! Thank you!
9/22/22, 6:15 PM
This storyline is amazing man, Great work!!
Anonymous
9/22/22, 7:38 AM
Are you going to write another chapter of this story? As I really enjoyed it and want to see more.

9/22/22, 4:45 PM
Hey there! Thank you so much -- I'm glad you enjoyed this. Maybe someday I'll revisit this universe! In the meantime, you might also like some of my other stories if you liked this one!
Rob
9/22/22, 3:24 PM
This is intense, hope it continues… 😈⛓️
9/21/22, 9:50 PM
I really love the sudden twist in the middle, and then the climax at the end haha. Excellent job with the main character development.

9/22/22, 2:52 PM
@drewfy Thank you Mr Were-Dog Dude. If anything (in my case) more like, excellent job on remembering this is erotica rather than an excuse to play with character development! :sweat_smile: I got lucky with this one having the char-development I needed to not hate the story, and enough sex to have it be proper erotic fiction. (A balance I admittedly don't always get right) .