Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/20/22, 7:48 AM
Omg I loved this! Can't wait to see what happens next
9/20/22, 6:50 AM
Great start. Hitting all the right notes so far.
9/20/22, 6:50 AM
Man, what a hot story. I was edging almost from the off. The piss at the end didn't do it for me, but I loved the rules, the transformations. These guys didn't mind doing gay stuff, but a load of fun and well thought through. Managing 9 different characters is a hard act, but I felt it didn't matter much for me to remember them, as you carefully gave us the focal characters and reminded us the key TFs they'd been through subtly. Thanks dude
9/20/22, 5:57 AM
I had to just take a fast look at it and I loved the idea and style. I want to read it propperly tomorrow, but I'm already hooked. I'm very intrigued for where you will take this!
9/20/22, 5:40 AM
I love fantasy stories, especially set in worlds with tons of magic and magical creatures. I’ll definitely be following this one!
9/20/22, 5:36 AM
This is getting hotter, this story needs to continue <3 💝✨
9/20/22, 3:15 AM
This has been such a great story. I don’t want it to end. Excellent work guys
9/19/22, 12:58 AM
Love how dark this is getting. More slavery and darkness the better. I love how you're stepping out of the happy ending cliches

9/19/22, 2:03 AM
@Erratic101Check and check, buddy! :heavy_check_mark: :heavy_check_mark: more votes for more slavery and darkness. I'm doing my best to not make a classic expected ending, but a nice surprise for all the readers.

9/20/22, 2:29 AM
@Plymouth58 cant wait for the next one
9/19/22, 11:45 PM
I LOVE the way you describe the tickling, and how you described the mental of the orc. It was so good I could almost feel it on my toes. Great work!
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9/19/22, 11:43 PM
I don't know if I want to be Chris, Mason or Nathan. But I know I want to be hypnotized by Charlie!