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Evan
9/19/22, 7:30 AM
Outstanding descriptions and visuals. It definitely had a fear aspect but also titillating. So much going on Eamon was unaware of or only snippets of awareness. I really enjoyed their relationship as well. That there was genuine affection and restraint while also giving way to Tarquin's nature and their combined purpose. A lot of hidden motives too. Was it on purpose or was it an error. So many questions layering the world building that just makes it more fun.

9/19/22, 7:01 PM
@Evan I really appreciate your care and the time you took to read this! It was fun to play with these different layers and see how things turned out between them. I'm glad you liked it because I think the project in working on now will have similar fear-horny ratios!
9/19/22, 5:02 AM
Love it, please continue!

9/19/22, 6:24 PM
@JTransform Thank you so much!
Anonymous
9/19/22, 7:59 AM
This was amazing, I really hope we get to see more of it!

9/19/22, 6:24 PM
@ Thank you so much!
9/19/22, 3:37 PM
Very hot, but I don’t get the Alien tag.

9/19/22, 6:24 PM
@Beaner Thank you and that was an accident haha
9/19/22, 5:26 PM
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Alex
9/19/22, 5:18 PM
Another hot chapter, hope Nick likes the new Jake.
Anonymous
9/19/22, 4:42 PM
This was hot!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Anonymous
9/19/22, 1:49 PM
Nice! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
9/19/22, 11:21 AM
Yay you're back! I was worried you decided to stop with the story. Right now Sparky is my favorite. It's funny but it looks like the "lower class" members are genuinely more caring than the "upper class". They seem more sensitive to Skippy's emotions and don't jump straight to punishment when he acts out. I admit I am a bit confused about the heights of the characters. I thought Skippy was tall but it seems everyone is taller than him, which I'm totally cool with, but it would be nice to know who's taller than who in this story Though it should be mentioned that while Sparky claims that no one there is a monster, Skippy has every right to think so. They kidnapped him, drugged him, tormented him, and while he doesn't know, fucked with his brain.

9/19/22, 1:41 PM
Thanks for the comment! Lemme see if I can address some of your thoughts. The more submissive pack members are meant to be a bit more….I don’t wanna say naïve but more carefree. Little less run down by life. Oak and Nyx are meant to be around 23-24 and lil Sparky is written to be about 19-20. Where as Ruby and Bright are intended to be around their late 20s to early 30s. And Titan is meant to be a guy around his early to mid 40s. Not that every puppy pack is built like that but I thought it seemed fitting for the fantasy. I have been a bit vague about sizes. But the implication is that Skippy is on the shorter side of things, maybe 5’3-5’5 tops. That’s where some of the attitude comes from, trying to compensate for being short. Sparky is about the same size but skinnier and not as built. Picture some of the guys from fun sized boys but looks closer to his actual age. In order of tallest to shortest. It’s Titan at 6’4-6’6 ish. Ruby is around 6 foot even. Bright is about 5’10. Oak is about 5’9, almost the same as Ruby and same height in boots. Nyx is about the same. And Sparky is about 5’5 if he’s standing on tip toes. He’s a small fella. As for the last one that’s a bit intentional again. It’s meant to show that Sparky is…..sheltered in suppose would be a good word for it. The pack tends to shield him from the rougher stuff due to his past and their desire to protect him and let him be little. He’s not stupid by any means he is fully aware they kidnapped this dude and are doing some fairly fucked up things to him. He may not know the full scope of what’s going on downstairs, but he knows that nobody would genuinely hurt this dude and it’s clear to him that turning the guy into a puppy is better then another homophobic asshole cop running around with an ego to match. That’s where he gets the “no one here is a monster” mentality. It’s less he has rose colored glasses on and more he is meant to kinda reflect a bit of the child like innocence where you think your parents/siblings can do no wrong. He is the baby after all haha. I hope that helps answer your questions. @Reader
8/26/22, 5:59 PM
So hot man...near creamed myself!

9/19/22, 12:41 PM
@Bren I'm happy to serve :3 feel free to read my others if you'd like