Recent Comments

9/19/22, 2:27 AM
That was a fun chapter. Not necessarily my kink, but reading about people different than you is half the fun, right? I really like Omar's enthusiasm for Trevor exploring his kink and how he's immediately jumping to "should we do this to help you?" That and his sadness when he thought things had gone badly show how much he loves Trevor. The way Liam establishes safety and boundaries is really nice to see. Its realistic and shows he's not an uncaring sadist. If Trevor is hurting himself in the treadmill, Liam will pump the breaks. And despite what he said about not realizing he could mix kink and his job, naming his dog after one of the most famous drill sergeants tells another story... I think you could probably crosspost this story to Gay Collar Stories now that we're firmly in BDSM country, if you really wanted to. Keep up the good work.
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9/19/22, 1:50 AM
love the story so far, but maybe more fellatio, more of kyle doing household chores and not realising the humiliation

9/19/22, 1:58 AM
@ I'm thanks for reading, buddy. You'll be happy to know there's more of that in the next two chapters :wink:
9/18/22, 11:15 PM
Excited to see where this goes!
9/18/22, 8:59 PM
Wow! I absolutely LOVE how they are messing with GL's mind and corrupting his memories! Your writing is excellent and keeping the story moving. Keeping the GL uniform on Kyle and using it to humiliate him is great. Too often, heroes are made to lose their costumes but, to me, that is a big part of their destruction. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work!

9/18/22, 9:15 PM
@WhiteyPA it's a shame when superheroes are stripped of their uniforms, right? :grin: just like policemen, soldiers or cowboys. Their clothes are an important part of their identity and status, so taking them off kills all of the interest and charm in a good story for me. I'm not a fan of doing that. Some full nudity is fun for a time, but completely stripping them of their symbols of power and authority at the end or for too long totally ruins the stories for me. I prefer to keep the uniforms or alter them, that is far more hot for me! :fire:
9/18/22, 10:42 AM
More people are added to the mix! Oh boy, we might be reaching a big climax... I think that even if the camera's effect are removed, Kyle is going to need therapy. Or being taken care of by Terry and David. Probably both. Still a very cool story. Don't worry about the time between chapter, I really don't mind ^ ^. And yeah... Looking at the comments above, corruption stories are kind of automatically on the darker side of things, due to subject matter? Especially with added humiliation. Tho, I read *much darker* on the site, your story had always been on the edge of me not being able to care anymore about what was happening, so... Don't change, just acknowledge that a few of the kinks you put in the story are firmly in the "somewhat disturbing and won't go well with everyone" (stoner, piss, cum dump...) Oddly enough, you'll notice a lot of the stories that include humiliation have it being done in a BDSM or oblivious type situation, so a guy being humiliated in his own house and struggling to regain dignity makes it definitively on the "hard to enjoy kink" side, even if the contents of the story aren't actually all that disturbing compared to other stuff I read. Still thumbs up, sorry if I come off a bit harsh.

9/18/22, 4:21 PM
@BobbyBlobfish. I love the idea that GL will need a caretaker and external conscience. Maybe thats the spin this tale need to make everything "all right". After 38 years as a Fire/Medic, a child of the Gorbals and 3X cancer survivor, I've always been able to find a salvageable point in everything I witnessed or endured. I also agree that the author should not compromise his ideas or fantasies. At the same time, I think there's room to make everyone happy. That this story has affected so many people and elicited suca strong response makes this a powerful writer. I'm responding on your thread because I love your stories too!

9/18/22, 8:35 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Hi! You were not harsh at all, buddy, thanks a lot for commenting! I love to get feedback and I have no dubts comments and rates are helping me to improve the story. The idea of GL needing therapy and caretaking is quite good actually, and would fit well with some of the things I see on the horizon. I'll keep it in mind. I'm so glad you didn't mind for the long wait! God, time goes by so fast, isn't it? But hopefully it won't take me as long to post the next one.
9/18/22, 9:05 AM
I personally love corruption and a dark ending. There are plenty of more vanilla story archives out there so I personally prefer authors going all out on their fetishes (as long as there's no death, that's probably where most people draw the line). There are certain parts I'm unable to enjoy but it's alright, since we can't like everything. But so far I'm still enjoying the story a lot! I'm liking the direction of where the story is going so I would say keep going with the mindfuckery. Thank you for this chapter and I'll be waiting for the next one.

9/18/22, 8:23 PM
@Somnius you're right, pal! I'm not a big fan of deaths in MC stories neither. I'm not expecting to have any of that here. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I hope I don't take too long with the next one, I'm excited to write again :)
9/18/22, 7:34 PM
Finally. Have been waiting for this forever. I so like how this is going. Having the two thugs enslaving Terry and David and probably John next. However, as at least one other comment said, it would be better if the humiliated character(s) turn out to actually like the sexual humiliation without being made to like it (and maybe having Kyle humiliate himself by doing something without the need of the thugs' orders. Thus unconsciously discovering a hidden lust). I personally wouldn't like a "happy ending" where the thugs are punished and the victims' lives return to normal (as long as the thugs aren't very evil bent on destroying whosever life just because they can). Such an ending would ruin the story. Though I respect your desire if it was for such an ending. This chapter was, however, a little short on events, consisting mostly of Kyle's past and his friends' plan without much of an action. But that's alright as I understand it serves as an introduction to a more eventful one, right?

9/18/22, 8:12 PM
@Superbelt Hello, pal! I really appreciate your comments, thanks for following this story. Hopefully the next chapter won't take that long. I know this one seemed a bit short compared to the last two and maybe the next one will be similar in length because they were originally one, but I decided to split it into two and not delay posting it any longer (by the way, there is a pending update that hasn't been still published with about 260 more words that add some extra details especially regarding Terry's dreams, I guess it will be available today or tomorrow maybe). The changes in Kyle's past will have ramifications in the future and open the door for more kinky action. I've been dropping a few hints here and there that Kyle has started to do things to himself out of what he's been strictly instructed to do, leaving it ambiguous how much is due the mindfucking and to what extent he's actually disgusted or happy with what he's doing. Thanks for your comments about the ending, I still don't have it 100% clear and everything helps me to think of new possibilities to explore. The comments help me make some decisions or add things (someone gave me a very good idea that I haven't been able to exploit yet, I can't wait for having John to arrive so I can do it, ha, ha.)
9/18/22, 8:04 PM
Great read! Can’t wait to read more!
9/18/22, 7:50 PM
Fucking sweet read. Looking forward to more.
9/18/22, 7:01 PM
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