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Sep 16, 2022
Andrew
9/19/22, 12:30 AM
I really loved the story I wish I could be Joe and be able to feel all the humiliation that John is doing even though I didn't want to do those things it would really be great
9/19/22, 6:45 AM
@Andrew thank you! What was your favorite thing John made him do?
Andrew
9/19/22, 7:03 AM
@Cargo Cub I think it was when he changed his underwear to a thong, also when he changed his body to something fatter and hairier and also when he made his body more sensitive and have a higher libido I really wish I had been Joe so I could feel all that humiliation
Sep 16, 2022
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/19/22, 4:52 AM
Wow! This really got to me. Don’t think it fully tranced me and I did not cum the first time, but I was definitely into it and following it very closely by the third time — and I came when told to! Thanks so much!
9/19/22, 5:14 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com YAY! I'm so glad it worked for you! I think it might get more convincing the more you go with the flow. I'm glad it worked for ya!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/19/22, 5:38 AM
@drewfy It definitely worked for me. It feels so good to submit to you, to obey you, Sir. Please post more like this. Some of us need this so much, Sir
Sep 16, 2022
9/17/22, 9:57 PM
I'm going to play Negative Nancy here; this is not a story, but a script for hypnosis. I say this critically because we have some great authors here, some who write amazing work time after time as well as some first-time authors who make the community better with their first outings. That's not to say this type of work isn't welcomed but for me, I'd say step your game up. It's easy to put something like this up, but the simplicity of it makes it a one-trick pony. If authors to whom English is not their native language can challenge themselves and write in English, you can challenge yourself and come up with something a little more complex than this. Just my two cents.
9/18/22, 5:50 AM
@New Guy in Town lol.
9/18/22, 11:47 PM
@drewfy Don't be all up in your feelings because you got some criticism (besides your reporting got turned down because it was constructive criticism after all). The best way to prove me wrong is to write something that makes me give you flowers instead of criticism. It's just that simple. And if the non-native English authors on here can get flowers from me, you can too. Just do the work, that's all you have to do. End of the conversation!!
9/19/22, 1:48 AM
@New Guy in Town lol.
9/19/22, 4:38 AM
_(I'm old and flustered by tech, and I don't know how to unflag a report and it's 5am here, so I'm gonna try resolve this with my words)._ _**First off, All parties;** I (and we Admin generally) are free to DM on our discord or on the site's main forum above. If you have opinions or grievances about this exchange following this final post on the matter, use _those_ channels. It feels more appropriate then marking someone's comment section with a big long drama. I mean, what are we, *Youtube!?*_ _[*pauses for laughter*]_ @New Guy in Town Please don't speak for GKS/GSS or claim to know why this-or-that report was turned down. Yes. You're free to criticise work here, but an author is neither obliged to legitimise that criticism, nor required to thank you for it, and anyways; nobody's criticism is gospel. Judging by your initial comment—which indeed, was deemed _not_ to be harassment—there seems to be a quality of concept in the piece that you are blind too / is not in your wheelhouse, and feedback from a reader who is missing a fundamental quality to that work, is about as useful to an author *focusing* on that quality, as a welding mask is to a portrait painter. You're free to think the work is terrible, and comment anyways. You're _not_ free to appoint yourself final speaker on the matter, or life coach to the author. He isn't obliged to prove you wrong, or trust your advice, or thank you when your criticism—to him—is valueless to the depth of missing a fundamental concept entirely. Please in future, just offer your ratings and commentary (good or bad) and leave it at that. Also, in case my tone seems one sided; thank you for taking the trouble to read, comment and contribute generally, _even_ when it is work you dislike. Raters and commenters make up a tiny percentage of our userbase and if possible, I mean only to curb your arrogance in this instance, not your gumption or your enterprise, which on the contrary, is something I believe our community could benefit from more people emulating. I hope that makes sense. Spiders.
Sep 16, 2022
9/19/22, 2:23 AM
This is the quality content gayspiralstories needs. Keep killin it Drewfy <3
9/19/22, 2:33 AM
@Elex Aww thank you so much <3.
Sep 17, 2022
9/19/22, 2:27 AM
That was a fun chapter. Not necessarily my kink, but reading about people different than you is half the fun, right? I really like Omar's enthusiasm for Trevor exploring his kink and how he's immediately jumping to "should we do this to help you?" That and his sadness when he thought things had gone badly show how much he loves Trevor. The way Liam establishes safety and boundaries is really nice to see. Its realistic and shows he's not an uncaring sadist. If Trevor is hurting himself in the treadmill, Liam will pump the breaks. And despite what he said about not realizing he could mix kink and his job, naming his dog after one of the most famous drill sergeants tells another story... I think you could probably crosspost this story to Gay Collar Stories now that we're firmly in BDSM country, if you really wanted to. Keep up the good work.
Sep 17, 2022
Anonymous
9/19/22, 1:50 AM
love the story so far, but maybe more fellatio, more of kyle doing household chores and not realising the humiliation
9/19/22, 1:58 AM
@ I'm thanks for reading, buddy. You'll be happy to know there's more of that in the next two chapters :wink:
Sep 11, 2022
9/18/22, 11:15 PM
Excited to see where this goes!
Sep 17, 2022
9/18/22, 8:59 PM
Wow! I absolutely LOVE how they are messing with GL's mind and corrupting his memories! Your writing is excellent and keeping the story moving. Keeping the GL uniform on Kyle and using it to humiliate him is great. Too often, heroes are made to lose their costumes but, to me, that is a big part of their destruction. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work!
9/18/22, 9:15 PM
@WhiteyPA it's a shame when superheroes are stripped of their uniforms, right? :grin: just like policemen, soldiers or cowboys. Their clothes are an important part of their identity and status, so taking them off kills all of the interest and charm in a good story for me. I'm not a fan of doing that. Some full nudity is fun for a time, but completely stripping them of their symbols of power and authority at the end or for too long totally ruins the stories for me. I prefer to keep the uniforms or alter them, that is far more hot for me! :fire:
Sep 17, 2022
9/18/22, 10:42 AM
More people are added to the mix! Oh boy, we might be reaching a big climax... I think that even if the camera's effect are removed, Kyle is going to need therapy. Or being taken care of by Terry and David. Probably both. Still a very cool story. Don't worry about the time between chapter, I really don't mind ^ ^. And yeah... Looking at the comments above, corruption stories are kind of automatically on the darker side of things, due to subject matter? Especially with added humiliation. Tho, I read *much darker* on the site, your story had always been on the edge of me not being able to care anymore about what was happening, so... Don't change, just acknowledge that a few of the kinks you put in the story are firmly in the "somewhat disturbing and won't go well with everyone" (stoner, piss, cum dump...) Oddly enough, you'll notice a lot of the stories that include humiliation have it being done in a BDSM or oblivious type situation, so a guy being humiliated in his own house and struggling to regain dignity makes it definitively on the "hard to enjoy kink" side, even if the contents of the story aren't actually all that disturbing compared to other stuff I read. Still thumbs up, sorry if I come off a bit harsh.
9/18/22, 4:21 PM
@BobbyBlobfish. I love the idea that GL will need a caretaker and external conscience. Maybe thats the spin this tale need to make everything "all right". After 38 years as a Fire/Medic, a child of the Gorbals and 3X cancer survivor, I've always been able to find a salvageable point in everything I witnessed or endured. I also agree that the author should not compromise his ideas or fantasies. At the same time, I think there's room to make everyone happy. That this story has affected so many people and elicited suca strong response makes this a powerful writer. I'm responding on your thread because I love your stories too!
9/18/22, 8:35 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Hi! You were not harsh at all, buddy, thanks a lot for commenting! I love to get feedback and I have no dubts comments and rates are helping me to improve the story. The idea of GL needing therapy and caretaking is quite good actually, and would fit well with some of the things I see on the horizon. I'll keep it in mind. I'm so glad you didn't mind for the long wait! God, time goes by so fast, isn't it? But hopefully it won't take me as long to post the next one.
Sep 17, 2022
9/18/22, 9:05 AM
I personally love corruption and a dark ending. There are plenty of more vanilla story archives out there so I personally prefer authors going all out on their fetishes (as long as there's no death, that's probably where most people draw the line). There are certain parts I'm unable to enjoy but it's alright, since we can't like everything. But so far I'm still enjoying the story a lot! I'm liking the direction of where the story is going so I would say keep going with the mindfuckery. Thank you for this chapter and I'll be waiting for the next one.
9/18/22, 8:23 PM
@Somnius you're right, pal! I'm not a big fan of deaths in MC stories neither. I'm not expecting to have any of that here. I'm glad you're enjoying it, I hope I don't take too long with the next one, I'm excited to write again :)