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9/18/22, 2:33 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/18/22, 1:12 PM
I want this story to go on forever
9/18/22, 12:51 PM
not only into fetish but more and more into bad boys activities. great:black_heart:
9/18/22, 12:40 PM
hottest. precisely and impressive.:smiling_imp:
9/18/22, 11:57 AM
Continuing to love your work. Well written and looking forward to what's next. Quite jealous of Todd even though he's not remembering...
9/18/22, 11:14 AM
Excellent work!
9/18/22, 10:40 AM
I’m shocked there isn’t more of this kind of stuff on GSS. Here’s hoping a trend begins 🤷🏼

9/18/22, 10:52 AM
@The Dirty Spiders Thank you and yes! Totally agree I noticed there were not so much content like this on here so I wanted to make it. Thanks for reading.
9/18/22, 10:09 AM
Gentle!
Sep 18, 2022
9/18/22, 4:03 AM
Hot, but the ending feels very sudden and abrupt, like there was intended to be more that got cut off. I think, from a narrative structure viewpoint, it feels like you ended things at the climax of the story and it's missing a proper Resolution/Falling Action. I'm not entirely sure why it feels that way to me, but it does. Beyond that, though, a very enjoyable premise and transformation.

mcbaer
9/18/22, 9:28 AM
@goodbiforever Oh yeah, that's fair, I think it's mostly because it was originally intended to be just a brief image caption rather than a fully fledged story and only accidentally ballooned out into something longer.