Recent Comments

9/18/22, 7:34 PM
Finally. Have been waiting for this forever. I so like how this is going. Having the two thugs enslaving Terry and David and probably John next. However, as at least one other comment said, it would be better if the humiliated character(s) turn out to actually like the sexual humiliation without being made to like it (and maybe having Kyle humiliate himself by doing something without the need of the thugs' orders. Thus unconsciously discovering a hidden lust). I personally wouldn't like a "happy ending" where the thugs are punished and the victims' lives return to normal (as long as the thugs aren't very evil bent on destroying whosever life just because they can). Such an ending would ruin the story. Though I respect your desire if it was for such an ending. This chapter was, however, a little short on events, consisting mostly of Kyle's past and his friends' plan without much of an action. But that's alright as I understand it serves as an introduction to a more eventful one, right?

9/18/22, 8:12 PM
@Superbelt Hello, pal! I really appreciate your comments, thanks for following this story. Hopefully the next chapter won't take that long. I know this one seemed a bit short compared to the last two and maybe the next one will be similar in length because they were originally one, but I decided to split it into two and not delay posting it any longer (by the way, there is a pending update that hasn't been still published with about 260 more words that add some extra details especially regarding Terry's dreams, I guess it will be available today or tomorrow maybe). The changes in Kyle's past will have ramifications in the future and open the door for more kinky action. I've been dropping a few hints here and there that Kyle has started to do things to himself out of what he's been strictly instructed to do, leaving it ambiguous how much is due the mindfucking and to what extent he's actually disgusted or happy with what he's doing. Thanks for your comments about the ending, I still don't have it 100% clear and everything helps me to think of new possibilities to explore. The comments help me make some decisions or add things (someone gave me a very good idea that I haven't been able to exploit yet, I can't wait for having John to arrive so I can do it, ha, ha.)
9/18/22, 8:04 PM
Great read! Can’t wait to read more!
9/18/22, 7:50 PM
Fucking sweet read. Looking forward to more.
9/18/22, 7:01 PM
I live to serve the Virus
Sep 18, 2022
9/18/22, 6:39 PM
as a bald, shaved head rubberman with a cockduster moustache, I dug this
9/17/22, 10:27 PM
after Joey, would be amazing to see you pick this back up

9/18/22, 1:49 PM
@Hdhshs definitely a possibility; after finally finishing a series, I'm feeling much more focused on closing out these long lingering cliffhangers

9/18/22, 5:44 PM
We all love your work @EdIam
9/18/22, 5:19 PM
looking forward to what’s next :laughing:
9/18/22, 4:31 PM
D, gotta get that rough sex!
9/18/22, 4:17 PM
Such an underrated kink combo! Excited to see where this goes, your stories are usually excellent!
Anonymous
9/18/22, 1:23 PM
Bandera. Like a flag?

9/18/22, 3:33 PM
@Anonymous correct, and Oran can mean green in Irish. There is a reoccurring theme of characters gaining names that start with O and B, so that was the name I came up for mine.