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9/18/22, 12:40 PM
hottest. precisely and impressive.:smiling_imp:
9/18/22, 11:57 AM
Continuing to love your work. Well written and looking forward to what's next. Quite jealous of Todd even though he's not remembering...
9/18/22, 11:14 AM
Excellent work!
9/18/22, 10:40 AM
I’m shocked there isn’t more of this kind of stuff on GSS. Here’s hoping a trend begins 🤷🏼

9/18/22, 10:52 AM
@The Dirty Spiders Thank you and yes! Totally agree I noticed there were not so much content like this on here so I wanted to make it. Thanks for reading.
9/18/22, 10:09 AM
Gentle!
Sep 18, 2022
9/18/22, 4:03 AM
Hot, but the ending feels very sudden and abrupt, like there was intended to be more that got cut off. I think, from a narrative structure viewpoint, it feels like you ended things at the climax of the story and it's missing a proper Resolution/Falling Action. I'm not entirely sure why it feels that way to me, but it does. Beyond that, though, a very enjoyable premise and transformation.

mcbaer
9/18/22, 9:28 AM
@goodbiforever Oh yeah, that's fair, I think it's mostly because it was originally intended to be just a brief image caption rather than a fully fledged story and only accidentally ballooned out into something longer.
9/18/22, 9:14 AM
Awesome chapter. Really loving this series.
9/18/22, 7:05 AM
I feel like after everything that happened to Kyle,it is a breath of fresh air to see David and Twrry to get mixed up. I know it's GL's story but I always wanted to see more of the camera. Hearing that more explanations about the villians sounds intriguing

9/18/22, 8:10 AM
@ForgottenCradle Hi! Glad you like the inclusion of Terry and David and I'm happy to hear you're interested in knowing more about the villains. I've already written a good part that talks about Chuy's past and I like it, but I was hesitant to make some severe cuts on it. I think it would give more dimension to him, but I was dubious if readers would like it or might feel it like a filler, which isn't my intention at all.
9/17/22, 8:51 AM
I love how different directions are between Sam and Joe. Hot chapter. Would love to see Sam being oblivious exhibitionist with more horny adventures in the public while Joe is completely aware what he is experiencing.

9/17/22, 8:37 PM
@starvagon123 we're going back to Sam in the next chapter, so going to explore his exhibition side. Still figuring out where I'm taking Joe next but I've got some time to figure that out.

Starvagon123
9/18/22, 8:04 AM
@Cargo Cub Can’t wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to seeing clothes choice that John has in place for Sam! 🔥