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9/16/22, 1:18 PM
I’ve always wanted to try hypnosis. I find it extremely erotic having someone take control of my mind. Wish I could find someone near me to do just that.

9/18/22, 1:43 AM
@Bootman I hear ya. I’ve always wanted to be a hypnotized robot, but hypnosis doesn’t really work on me no matter what I try. I’ve never been able to relax, ever, so I don’t know what ‘relaxing’ feels like. Even when I’ve had downtime and just laying there my mind is going a million miles an hour. I’ve even had an in person hypnotist try. I have an extremely vivid imagination (that seems to semi-autonomous, giving me images when I don’t want them) and can follow every single direction perfectly except for “relax.”
9/8/22, 5:47 AM
Haha I read this out loud to my boyfriend while he sucked and jerked me. It's a great story and your writing style is also great. It was easier to read out than another one I tried. Thanks :)

9/18/22, 1:11 AM
@Dreadmage23 thank you for the review! I'm glad you and your boyfriend could enjoy it together!
9/18/22, 12:49 AM
I have to say that I am a bit afraid for Liam. Thinking that he loses himself, his love and his life to this kink and will become a military "drone" and inlist kind of gives me shivers... and a boner. Hope it doesn't turn to dark with him and he stays happy.
9/17/22, 8:27 PM
I think we know you're safe word as I think you used pineapple as a safe word in Mind Control Palace Preppy story

9/18/22, 12:04 AM
@nerdysuitedbaby My motto has always been "Write what you know" :rofl:
9/5/22, 9:30 AM
Wakey wakey I hope this doesn't become another incomplete story series Please continue the story!

Tyrol
9/12/22, 10:25 PM
@Anima I really want to keep going but I just started a new job so that takes up most of my time, I've got a new boyfriend, and I've also been writing some non-porn in the little time I allocate for writing. So while I hope I can continue because I really enjoyed writing I'm not sure when that will be 😭

9/17/22, 11:57 PM
@Tyrol Oookkkaaaayy lol I guess I can wait a while longer.
bucke
9/17/22, 10:59 PM
I'm loving this so far. Really excited to see how this develops!
9/17/22, 1:44 AM
I'm loving the libido and sensitivity increases and how he reacts to those! Making him play with his newly sensitive nipples was really good. I would add to that making his whole package a size where he thinks it's too big, so when he does get hard and horny he's unable to hide it and it further humiliates and embarrasses him when he does leave the apartment, especially if the leakage were increased along with it!

9/17/22, 8:27 PM
@djinnie love that idea, especially the precum leakage. Just got to make sure he's wearing pants that show wet spots really well. Thanks

9/17/22, 10:04 PM
@Cargo Cub My thought with the size increase was to have him suck himself off and be unable to keep up with the production so he still makes a mess no matter what he does. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter with whatever you choose! We're already blueballing for your next chapter :D Keep it up!
9/17/22, 9:45 PM
Gracias!
Evan
9/12/22, 7:42 AM
A truly excellent chapter. Great callback to mister wolf who needed a little nudge to find himself and be free. I'm glad he chose to stay. So much unknown, such a wonderful world. I can't wait until the next part.

9/17/22, 9:45 PM
@Evan Hi Evan! Thank you so much for your kind words once again. There's still some more to go and we're sure to see more wonderfully weird things. Working on the next chapter, see you there!
9/17/22, 4:22 PM
I wondered what has happened to the sister and her husband.

9/17/22, 8:46 PM
I guess they had kids with the fertility totem 🤷‍♂️😅. Idk, it was just to emphasize that Luther f*cked up with the totem. Thank your for the read, and hop you enjoyed 😊@Honeyflower