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Anonym
9/17/22, 7:33 AM
Discovered this series yesterday and you won't believe how happy I was to see that Chpater 3 came out today. Personally, I would also like to see Sam get dumber. Or maybe think he is a dog? That'd be hot. As long as things don't get needlessly mean. Sam seems like a nice guy and torturing him would be a turnoff for me. But it's your story, so write what you want. I'm definetly looking forward to the next chapter. Your writing is amazing and I can't wait to see where it goes

9/17/22, 8:31 PM
@Anonym thank you! I definitely want to play with making Joe a little more animalistic, but not sure how far I want it to go. Chapter 4 has us going back to Sam, so I've got some time to think on what will happen with Joe.
9/17/22, 5:03 AM
What a hot series! John's really enjoying his muscled pig Joe. I'd love Joe to beg for John's cock, or maybe Sam's.

9/17/22, 8:28 PM
@Lusty Stallion that's certainly the plan, just going to take some time for Joe to break under the stain of John's control. Thanks for the comment.
9/17/22, 8:23 PM
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9/17/22, 8:18 PM
This chapter was fantastic, bravo!
9/17/22, 7:52 PM
As hot as the sex scenes are I stopped reading the series because it’s so dArk and hopeless. Theres no equality, recovery or enjoyment for the victim. Its excellent writing but if you want to capture a larger audience, it would behoove you to give little victories or bits of enjoyment to the victims, or if the character is evil, satisfaction to their victims. Again, well written but it’s narrowing your audience.

9/17/22, 8:18 PM
@Stroppy Author Hello, thank you very much for commenting, all comments and constructive criticism are welcome and I appreciate them very much. First of all, it means a lot to me that you think it's well written. Being English my non-native language, I try very hard to do quality work for all of you, and I'm glad to know you think so. Oh, man, I’m surprised, I honestly didn't think the story was so dark and hopeless! I thought I'd managed to make clear Kyle’s guilty pleasure he’s experiencing, and that a big part of what's happening to him is so tortuous, because in some degree that he refuses to admit to himself, he's actually enjoying in part what's going on, and that he’s definitely having the best sex he ever had. That was my intention in chapter 12 with the meeting of the three Kyles: the conflict between his morality, his reality and his animal instincts. I'm sorry I have not been clear on that. This is my first story, so I totally accept that it may have flaws like that. And in fact some of what you’re saying (the enjoyment of the victims) appears better explores in chapter 14, which I’m already working on. But of course I take the criticism, and I respect your decision not to continue reading it. I will keep all of that in mind. Again, thanks a lot for the feedback, buddy!
9/17/22, 8:00 PM
AMAZING! sequel please?
9/17/22, 7:57 PM
He who shall not be named did you get that from Harry Potter? I use that for a former president.
9/17/22, 6:53 PM
This is great, don't rush it
9/17/22, 6:17 PM
loving this story so far i cant wait for the next part
9/17/22, 6:03 PM
Love this story, Really hope the author will continue it soon!