Recent Comments

9/17/22, 9:17 AM
Great story! Hope there’s a second chapter
9/17/22, 7:21 AM
Thanks a lot, knowing I can comment on any of your works no matter how long ago you wrote them & you will answer means it has value. to comment & trust me I plan on doing so. For some reason the narrator has gotten to me. Could he be a kind of Doctor & Jekyll character having two sides to him and meet Sammy again switching roles back and forth what say you As always these are your kids so to speak * you will do as you want and I have no right to expect you to listen to my desires. As a great fan I will love what ever you have to give us your readers & fans.
9/17/22, 6:51 AM
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9/17/22, 5:39 AM
So glad to see a new chapter! Skippy's time with Sparky was great, love Sparky the most so far. Can't wait for the next one.
9/17/22, 1:39 AM
I loved it 💝

9/17/22, 3:37 AM
@Splat Player Yayy good good!
Malefiscar
9/16/22, 9:31 PM
If you're asking for some suggestions, I wouldn't mind watching Joe get some points shaved off the old IQ. He's already a pretty ignorant dude, but I think smoothing his brain out a little might make him more docile and obedient haha. Absolutely loving your work so far, already one of my favorite story ideas on here!

9/17/22, 1:19 AM
@Malefiscar thank you for the kind words, it really makes it easier to write knowing that people are wanting to read it. It might be fun to make him a little dumber, but I don't really want that to be what makes him obedient. I like the idea of him breaking slowly as he sees how much control John has and how hopeless it is for him. But I'll keep it in mind and see where my writing takes me.

Malefiscar
9/17/22, 2:12 AM
@Cargo Cub Thanks for the reply! I certainly won't be chapped if you don't use my suggestion, I'm sure whatever you write will be fantastic :)
9/16/22, 7:49 PM
I have gone back to read certain Chapters I skimmed before and ias I am reading Chapter 12I saw Sammy call the narrator Ace, is that his name, Jack?

9/17/22, 1:32 AM
@br6205 nah just a nickname we used to call people on our baseball team and decided to use it here
Iriefal
9/16/22, 11:29 PM
Damn, what you did is nice, I agree with malefiacar about lowering IQ, but I would make him enjoy being tortured and played with, maybe seek out master for himself and ofc John would be the best candidate

9/17/22, 1:23 AM
@Iriefal I plan on getting more into CBT and some more extreme anal and nipple play, but my main focus is a slow build and writing what flows naturally. I could just write a story about a daddy bear sub getting taken in by a younger master if I just wanted that... Which would be really hot.. I'll put it on my shortlist of stories to work on lol.
9/17/22, 1:14 AM
I dream of a new chapter of this!!!! Please!!! Moooooo
Vinnie
9/10/22, 3:46 AM
Will we get a chapter from the bride to Be perspective letting everyone know how proud she is of her Cockslut husband

9/11/22, 5:44 PM
@Vinnie def have plans for the wedding. Just gotta get the other (male) family members ready for the ceremony first 🥰

Vinnie
9/11/22, 6:09 PM
@EdIam we cant wait

Anonymous
9/12/22, 4:35 PM
So can u give a hint of when exactly will the sequel will be released?

9/12/22, 4:37 PM
@Anonymous I’ll be honest, I’m uncertain. The story I’m working on with another (amazing) writer from the site is taking a bit more of my erotic hypno energy. But hopefully by the end of September lol

Anonymous
9/14/22, 1:16 AM
Ooh, what is the theme?@EdIam

Anonymous
9/17/22, 12:15 AM
Wake me up when September ends @EdIam