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9/17/22, 1:42 PM
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! Hopefully he ends up wearing a full uniform, or be taught to dress properly
9/17/22, 1:23 PM
More butt growth! D
Martin
9/17/22, 11:31 AM
I accidentally deleted a vote for D so please count this :)
9/17/22, 10:16 AM
Loved it so far 😈
9/17/22, 9:17 AM
Great story! Hope there’s a second chapter
9/17/22, 7:21 AM
Thanks a lot, knowing I can comment on any of your works no matter how long ago you wrote them & you will answer means it has value. to comment & trust me I plan on doing so. For some reason the narrator has gotten to me. Could he be a kind of Doctor & Jekyll character having two sides to him and meet Sammy again switching roles back and forth what say you As always these are your kids so to speak * you will do as you want and I have no right to expect you to listen to my desires. As a great fan I will love what ever you have to give us your readers & fans.
9/17/22, 6:51 AM
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9/17/22, 5:39 AM
So glad to see a new chapter! Skippy's time with Sparky was great, love Sparky the most so far. Can't wait for the next one.
9/17/22, 1:39 AM
I loved it 💝

9/17/22, 3:37 AM
@Splat Player Yayy good good!
Malefiscar
9/16/22, 9:31 PM
If you're asking for some suggestions, I wouldn't mind watching Joe get some points shaved off the old IQ. He's already a pretty ignorant dude, but I think smoothing his brain out a little might make him more docile and obedient haha. Absolutely loving your work so far, already one of my favorite story ideas on here!

9/17/22, 1:19 AM
@Malefiscar thank you for the kind words, it really makes it easier to write knowing that people are wanting to read it. It might be fun to make him a little dumber, but I don't really want that to be what makes him obedient. I like the idea of him breaking slowly as he sees how much control John has and how hopeless it is for him. But I'll keep it in mind and see where my writing takes me.

Malefiscar
9/17/22, 2:12 AM
@Cargo Cub Thanks for the reply! I certainly won't be chapped if you don't use my suggestion, I'm sure whatever you write will be fantastic :)