Recent Comments

4/10/25, 8:37 AM
Good start, can't wait for more!
4/10/25, 8:13 AM
Hooray! I always delight in seeing another chapter in this wonderful series. Further developing the characters and the world is a treat in itself, but having more added to the story is the icing on the cakes. As always, the emotion leaks through to the reader and I feel so much of what the characters are feeling and share their worries about what is ahead. Thank you both for this tale.
7B7
4/7/25, 7:02 PM
Either way I just want to say I find your stories enthralling. You put so much detail your writing and I enjoy reading your stories.

4/10/25, 7:05 AM
@[7B7](/user/show/920618) That means a lot! Thank you so much!
4/8/25, 8:37 PM
Maybe by the time High School graduation rolls around, there will be many nubbed senior boys, if not the whole class....thanks to a cursed magic pouch that gets increasingly irresistible to try on with every use.

4/10/25, 3:31 AM
@[jockbear](/user/show/920371) that was going to be the premise for the original story and the swim team.
4/10/25, 1:49 AM
You made this chapter so light-hearted and wholesome. I honestly love it the most just for that reason.
4/10/25, 1:10 AM
Love the story and I hope that you continue it.
4/9/25, 9:56 PM
Really good foundation set here. Looking forward to seeing it develop
Anonymous
4/9/25, 9:30 PM
Make him shorter, make him a dwarf,
Jai
4/1/25, 5:47 PM
One of the best on the site

4/9/25, 7:29 PM
Thank you, @Jai, for your feedback.