Recent Comments

8/17/22, 12:45 PM
Ye God's I love the story and the development and the whole milleu. I love where my mind's eye thinks you're taking this. And count me in on the ticket to ride. Noct. Absolutely smashing success of writing and I loved how you wove Jack's super sensory abilities into the mix

8/17/22, 1:34 PM
@Relzad thank you! And definitely I'm going... someplace with this. 😉

9/11/22, 11:09 AM
@Nocturne13 The writing here is superb. Definately on par with "Clause" and before anyone else gets in with the suggestion. If you decide to publish, or maybe even do a crossover (heh). Put me down for a purchase of the book. Once again. Kudos R
9/11/22, 7:37 AM
A shame this never got completed; a really unique story.
Anonymous
1/30/16, 9:17 PM
When is this going to continue

9/11/22, 6:56 AM
@Agree a story such as this need to continue.
9/11/22, 6:54 AM
Great but one change I would have made is have Jamie fuck Sam. Also slaves should also be devoid of body hair.
fantassdick
9/3/22, 1:21 PM
This is absolutely divine. The institutional/prison setting. The contrasting tenderness of Cho and severity of Cortez. Phil's defiant (but misguided) belief that he will be able to resist treatment. You should totally dig into this setting as a series. Escape attempts, failed sentencing appeals, dynamics between Chargers and manimals, family visits to the prison, etc... a goldmine. Keep up the awesome work!

Evan
9/11/22, 4:31 AM
@fantassdick Thank you so much for taking the time to write this. And for the praise, I appreciate it. I am delighted you enjoyed it. Cho and Cortez's contrast is one of my favourite parts of it so I'm glad that resonated with you too. Your ideas for digging into the series are excellent. I hadn't thought about escape attempts but that could make for an interesting lens. Food for thought. Thank you again!
9/11/22, 2:21 AM
Amazing story!! I didn’t want it to end!!!
9/10/22, 10:56 PM
Oh no that's so messed up! I'm so sorry to hear that! I'd do anything to have more of this story. It really speaks to me!
9/10/22, 10:41 PM
OMG please write more! I was hanging on ever word.
9/10/22, 8:45 PM
Every time I read a new Jack Parker story - hell, even when I re-read an old Jack Parker story - I want to smash my laptop and break all my pencils.
9/10/22, 7:16 PM
great story