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Pup Trance
9/9/22, 11:32 AM
Amazing Job, this story was very erotic for it. Pup loves the way the Therapist didn't have to do much to have the Father enjoy the fruits of his labor. So sexual and hot even more so as You can see that He didn't get involved, He just kept up the powerful trance in the son, and was so encouraging of it. Hot! Hope there are more good boys to come!
9/9/22, 7:28 AM
I like the story and plot:+1: If you are open to a suggestion, get someone to help edit the finished chapter
9/9/22, 5:23 AM
Amazing! Always glad to revisit Daniel and his family and this was so sweet. A great series with an ever expanding family that loves each other. A Norismo classic.

9/9/22, 6:31 AM
@Essex Thank you so much! Now that i have _two_ neverending stories, I'll be kept busy for a long time :grin:
9/9/22, 5:57 AM
Loved it! I hope there is more!
Sep 8, 2022
9/9/22, 5:55 AM
Love this! Hope Josh gives in to his darker desires he he
Sep 8, 2022
rwriter51
9/9/22, 5:43 AM
Superb chapter. The only thing wrong is I want more! Josh is obviously so susceptible to Ethan's suggestions. The question in my mind is will all of Ethan's subjects submit as easily, or will he need to work and study more?
9/9/22, 5:29 AM
This chapter was both a wonderfully erotic hypno session and a horrible tease. If you keep making these chapters so mind-bendingly hot and so frustratingly short, I am going to need that hypno recording i suggested last chapter to make the wait for the next chapter bearable. So, here's what I'm thinking: you could create an audio file in which I would be triggered every evening at 10:30pm to check for a new chapter. If I don't find the next chapter, I will swear using the word "Fuck!", and that will be my trigger to forget all about the story until the next night at 10:30pm. If I do find a new chapter, I will shout, "Hot damn!" and that will be my trigger to have hotly erotic gay submissive hypnosis dreams throughout my REM sleep that night, then forget about the story again until 10:30pm that night. What do you think?
9/9/22, 4:14 AM
Really love this story !!! Can't wait for more :heart_eyes:
Anonymous
9/9/22, 3:30 AM
JOEY
9/9/22, 2:13 AM
As good as this one was, a real long one next time wowuld be better!