Recent Comments

9/7/22, 7:05 AM
Awesome, I loved the way the triggers were so casually sprinkled throughout the dialogue.
9/7/22, 6:30 AM
Really really enjoyed this man. Thanks for a great story. Recently discovered you on tumblr only to find that account deactivated. I was sad because I wanted to read more of your amazing stories. Thanks for linking your tumblr account. Love the ass growth you do!
9/7/22, 5:13 AM
It'd be nice if Bill remembered.
9/7/22, 4:43 AM
The hottest sex scene of this series yet! I love how Freddy is developing and Scarlett's kindness and tact in this chapter!
Anonymous
9/7/22, 3:41 AM
Love a good bubble butt growth story. A hot bit of writing you have here
Anonymous
9/7/22, 1:36 AM
So hot! Great story.
9/6/22, 11:36 PM
Great story. Hope to see Jake getting into trouble with more cigar smokers.
9/6/22, 11:16 PM
Absolutely excellent!
9/6/22, 10:35 PM
Needed to be proof read and edited before posting. So many wrong words - you could tell what he was trying to say, but seriously, it needed a simple edit. Zero mind control in this story....
Evan
9/5/22, 6:17 AM
A great continuation. I really enjoy the slow burn change. The subtle nods to the main character drinking cum to speed up the change without knowing it is also fun. The reality rewrite is also done really well. "Just like any other day". And we all know what happens in detention, don't we. There can't be too many humans left in the school at this rate. Maybe just the checkers club. :)

9/6/22, 10:27 PM
@Evan Glad to hear you enjoyed a lot of different aspects of the story. The cum drinking part wasn't even in the original outline, it was just an idea I had when editing that was too hot to ignore. I'm happy it landed so well with you and others. I intend to jump around a little and see how other students manage the school year. We'll see how they handle it. :wink: Thank you for the comment and for reading!