Recent Comments

9/7/22, 4:43 AM
The hottest sex scene of this series yet! I love how Freddy is developing and Scarlett's kindness and tact in this chapter!
Anonymous
9/7/22, 3:41 AM
Love a good bubble butt growth story. A hot bit of writing you have here
Anonymous
9/7/22, 1:36 AM
So hot! Great story.
9/6/22, 11:36 PM
Great story. Hope to see Jake getting into trouble with more cigar smokers.
9/6/22, 11:16 PM
Absolutely excellent!
9/6/22, 10:35 PM
Needed to be proof read and edited before posting. So many wrong words - you could tell what he was trying to say, but seriously, it needed a simple edit. Zero mind control in this story....
Evan
9/5/22, 6:17 AM
A great continuation. I really enjoy the slow burn change. The subtle nods to the main character drinking cum to speed up the change without knowing it is also fun. The reality rewrite is also done really well. "Just like any other day". And we all know what happens in detention, don't we. There can't be too many humans left in the school at this rate. Maybe just the checkers club. :)

9/6/22, 10:27 PM
@Evan Glad to hear you enjoyed a lot of different aspects of the story. The cum drinking part wasn't even in the original outline, it was just an idea I had when editing that was too hot to ignore. I'm happy it landed so well with you and others. I intend to jump around a little and see how other students manage the school year. We'll see how they handle it. :wink: Thank you for the comment and for reading!
9/4/22, 5:16 PM
This is so good, man, really reminds me of Knothole High and stuff like that. Not many stories here that combine anthros (especially canines) with jocks and masculinization. This story is hitting all of my buttons, from the massive bulking up to the mental changes and jockification. I don’t know what you have planned, but I always enjoy seeing the transformation spread out over a longer period of time rather than one event, but this is still awesome.

9/6/22, 10:19 PM
@Wrangler Hey there, thanks for reading! Yeah, KH was a huge inspiration for me here. I wanted to give it a slightly different spin by making it first-person and adding a few personal touches to it. I'm glad to hear it resonated so well with you. Overall I really enjoy writing this stuff and I have a few more chapters planned. Thanks for commenting, have a good one!
9/6/22, 8:50 PM
Can't wait to read more!
Martin
9/6/22, 8:47 PM
That's one hot story... I love that it's consensual, too (added that tag)