Todd! Dude! Wow! I got so excited reading just the first few paragraphs with Tod the chut getting plowed that I felt compelled to comment on that part, first. WOW! You have such a deliciously decadent mind for superhero porn writing (plus all your other porn stories). This Story already (via what I've read so far) adds to your cache of brilliant naughty works. As for our sidekick chut? Hot is a minor descriptor to give that scene. The idea of a pudgy Indian man bitching a once proud, manly, jock, stud American superhero is sexy as fuck. You hit my kink meter to 10+ when Tod not only wore those briefs, but his top slit them in order to access his chut's steamy white boi cunt. Thanks, and I'll comment later about our main hero getting... Chut-i-fied!!! 😁😎😛👅👏🏼

Time for an updated summary of everything that is going on here: 1) Base Nick - Your classic straight* himbo: big, dumb, and kind. Can be a little full of himself, but kind to his friends, teammates, and roommate. Has a magic* dick that women are attracted to, and when fucking puts both partners in "the zone" and they black out/go on automatic; we don't know if this effects dudes. Listens to dudes (he respects/ with authority?) To such an extent that they can make him cum or change his way of thinking (though there is a chance something else magnifies this). Wants Darius to be in control of him. Might be into pup play. 1.1) Hypnotized Nick - Gwen's computer program has hypnotized him and is making him a douchy gay jock bro. He's becoming ruder, more controlling, and much more critical of everyone around him. Thinks he knows best and everyone, including Darius, should just listen to him and do as he says. Much more "dominant". Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.2) Cursed Nick - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a dom top. When he us assertive he gains muscle. Teammates, opposing players, and his coach feel sick when they oppose him and are much more willing to back down and follow him. Ill effects might go away when they listen, and they seem more inclined to do so. Darius hasn't gotten sick from him yet. Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.3) Puppy Nick - Gets joy out of listening to Darius, wearing his collar, and doing what he says. Generally kind and more willing to try to be a better person. Often says this is exactly what he wants and has consented to, but Darius has doubts. Can (currently) override alpha douche king. Aware 2) Base Darius - Gay guy, decently in shape with some muscle tone. Attracted to his roommate and worried about having so much control over someone. 2.1) "Hypnotized" Darius - Intended to make him a submissive gay beta. Broken from a combination of him already being gay and his father calling during the first dose. Immediately sends his computer away, so doesn't fets the 2-3 weeks of dosing Nick got. No known lasting effects. Aware 2.2) Cursed Darius - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a submissive bottom. She thought it would force him to listen to whatever she asked him to do, but doesn't seem to. He loses muscle when he is submissive to Nick, and Nick can force him to change his mind, including forgetting things. Unaware Am i missing anything so far? Looking forward to future chapters and being utterly shattered when Nick goes full on Alpha douche and loses himself, probably hurting Darius and effecting his mind as well.. (Hopefully followed by a happy ending, of course.)

Hot start! I hope Mike goes back for it and comes to crave musk and sweat.

I found this an interesting read. I'm personally a bit more vanilla-inclined when it comes to body modification, but I did enjoy this more exploratory and lore-building story. I'm very interested in what the other categories are and thank you for posting your work.

So hot! Looking forward to more!

I really really love the parts about respects, about the submissive being a full man with personal life (family, work, friends and so on). Thanks for writing a respectful and realist tale of TPE. This kind of story is needed as reminder for each and everyone of us.

Great idea for a story! I hope to see where this grows; I mean goes.

Amazing chapter and a nice conclusion to the whole story. Though I had hoped for Jesus to completely fall and give in to the corruption. The redemption (even if he's still tainted) took me a bit out of the mood. But that's personal preference. Although, if you'd ever feel like posting an alternative ending... That would be really hot! ;)

This is such a fucking hot chapter! You had elements in here that I genuinely wasn't expecting, like Erik cumming every time his cock was hit. You could have written us 10,000 words on that and I still would have been shooting days after. Yet another triumph, and I'm looking forward to how your twisted mind takes care of Eli!

I absolutely love this series, and I absolutely need Uri to get what's coming to him, because that kind of shitty narcissism is what gives a lot of the gay community in my area a bad name. Also, I just like bottoms being put in their place by a mind-numbing amount of cum!