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9/4/22, 5:16 PM
This is so good, man, really reminds me of Knothole High and stuff like that. Not many stories here that combine anthros (especially canines) with jocks and masculinization. This story is hitting all of my buttons, from the massive bulking up to the mental changes and jockification. I don’t know what you have planned, but I always enjoy seeing the transformation spread out over a longer period of time rather than one event, but this is still awesome.

9/6/22, 10:19 PM
@Wrangler Hey there, thanks for reading! Yeah, KH was a huge inspiration for me here. I wanted to give it a slightly different spin by making it first-person and adding a few personal touches to it. I'm glad to hear it resonated so well with you. Overall I really enjoy writing this stuff and I have a few more chapters planned. Thanks for commenting, have a good one!
9/6/22, 8:50 PM
Can't wait to read more!
Martin
9/6/22, 8:47 PM
That's one hot story... I love that it's consensual, too (added that tag)
9/6/22, 2:01 PM
How do I commission the next two chapters of this? I have a plan to run a sex-positive D&D campaign/LARP with some friends, and I would love to give them something of yours to read to set the tone of the event before we get together and play.

Kybal Lutra
9/6/22, 6:21 PM
@TheD whoa that’s awesome! Always wanted to be part of a sex-positive D&D group, so kudos to you for that! Would love to know how that goes. And as far as more chapters… well, just wait and see! But if you want, feel free to reach out on my twitter if you want something commissioned of your own.
Zai
9/6/22, 5:10 PM
Todd! Dude! Wow! I got so excited reading just the first few paragraphs with Tod the chut getting plowed that I felt compelled to comment on that part, first. WOW! You have such a deliciously decadent mind for superhero porn writing (plus all your other porn stories). This Story already (via what I've read so far) adds to your cache of brilliant naughty works. As for our sidekick chut? Hot is a minor descriptor to give that scene. The idea of a pudgy Indian man bitching a once proud, manly, jock, stud American superhero is sexy as fuck. You hit my kink meter to 10+ when Tod not only wore those briefs, but his top slit them in order to access his chut's steamy white boi cunt. Thanks, and I'll comment later about our main hero getting... Chut-i-fied!!! 😁😎😛👅👏🏼

9/6/22, 5:21 PM
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it@Zai
9/5/22, 5:25 AM
Time for an updated summary of everything that is going on here: 1) Base Nick - Your classic straight* himbo: big, dumb, and kind. Can be a little full of himself, but kind to his friends, teammates, and roommate. Has a magic* dick that women are attracted to, and when fucking puts both partners in "the zone" and they black out/go on automatic; we don't know if this effects dudes. Listens to dudes (he respects/ with authority?) To such an extent that they can make him cum or change his way of thinking (though there is a chance something else magnifies this). Wants Darius to be in control of him. Might be into pup play. 1.1) Hypnotized Nick - Gwen's computer program has hypnotized him and is making him a douchy gay jock bro. He's becoming ruder, more controlling, and much more critical of everyone around him. Thinks he knows best and everyone, including Darius, should just listen to him and do as he says. Much more "dominant". Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.2) Cursed Nick - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a dom top. When he us assertive he gains muscle. Teammates, opposing players, and his coach feel sick when they oppose him and are much more willing to back down and follow him. Ill effects might go away when they listen, and they seem more inclined to do so. Darius hasn't gotten sick from him yet. Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.3) Puppy Nick - Gets joy out of listening to Darius, wearing his collar, and doing what he says. Generally kind and more willing to try to be a better person. Often says this is exactly what he wants and has consented to, but Darius has doubts. Can (currently) override alpha douche king. Aware 2) Base Darius - Gay guy, decently in shape with some muscle tone. Attracted to his roommate and worried about having so much control over someone. 2.1) "Hypnotized" Darius - Intended to make him a submissive gay beta. Broken from a combination of him already being gay and his father calling during the first dose. Immediately sends his computer away, so doesn't fets the 2-3 weeks of dosing Nick got. No known lasting effects. Aware 2.2) Cursed Darius - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a submissive bottom. She thought it would force him to listen to whatever she asked him to do, but doesn't seem to. He loses muscle when he is submissive to Nick, and Nick can force him to change his mind, including forgetting things. Unaware Am i missing anything so far? Looking forward to future chapters and being utterly shattered when Nick goes full on Alpha douche and loses himself, probably hurting Darius and effecting his mind as well.. (Hopefully followed by a happy ending, of course.)

Kods
9/6/22, 7:58 AM
@BlindSeer0 I'm very, very happy you took the time to type this all out! Looks like someone's paying attention. I will say some of the small, _finer_, details are slightly off, but I hope the upcoming chapters (not the next one) gives more insight to what's going on and how the story will be unfolding going forward.

9/6/22, 5:20 PM
@Kods Good to know i was in the general ballpark. The curse is still pretty unknown, and I'm sure i missed things with both the hypno and how Nick functions. This actually came about because i was trying to give a Summary of this story (and "Husbros and Son" which i had just read for the first time, loved, and left a review on) to my (straight*) twin, and their reaction was basically "WOW, that's a lot to process."
9/6/22, 2:20 PM
Hot start! I hope Mike goes back for it and comes to crave musk and sweat.
9/6/22, 11:05 AM
I found this an interesting read. I'm personally a bit more vanilla-inclined when it comes to body modification, but I did enjoy this more exploratory and lore-building story. I'm very interested in what the other categories are and thank you for posting your work.
9/6/22, 10:07 AM
So hot! Looking forward to more!
9/6/22, 9:26 AM
I really really love the parts about respects, about the submissive being a full man with personal life (family, work, friends and so on). Thanks for writing a respectful and realist tale of TPE. This kind of story is needed as reminder for each and everyone of us.