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9/6/22, 10:07 AM
So hot! Looking forward to more!
9/6/22, 9:26 AM
I really really love the parts about respects, about the submissive being a full man with personal life (family, work, friends and so on). Thanks for writing a respectful and realist tale of TPE. This kind of story is needed as reminder for each and everyone of us.
9/6/22, 9:06 AM
Great idea for a story! I hope to see where this grows; I mean goes.
Anonymous
9/5/22, 8:38 PM
Amazing chapter and a nice conclusion to the whole story. Though I had hoped for Jesus to completely fall and give in to the corruption. The redemption (even if he's still tainted) took me a bit out of the mood. But that's personal preference. Although, if you'd ever feel like posting an alternative ending... That would be really hot! ;)

Anonymous
9/6/22, 12:13 AM
I share the exact same sentiment. I feel like an alternative ending is in order (which is more immediate gratification than a part 2 where Jesus comes back of his own accord for more)

9/6/22, 4:54 AM
I knew it might be divisive to not corrupt Jesus completely in this chapter, but I wanted to leave the story open to evolve into a further conflict between heaven and hell. I might write an alternate (what if) ending if enough people want it. Let me know what you think!

9/6/22, 5:10 AM
@Anonymous thank you for reading! I struggled with the potential corruption, but ultimately had more juicy ideas that I wanted to explore that were best served by leaving the story open ended. I might write an alternate ending if enough people demand it! So keep your eyes peeled!

Anonymous
9/6/22, 5:11 AM
@Focus please do. I think this was a smart ending in the whole scheme of things, leaving it open for a further plot. But I think an alternative ending to also just close this series for some of the readers would be nice.

Anonymous
9/6/22, 5:12 AM
@Focus I would definitely love an alternative ending personally. I loved chapter and series right until the end. I would love future stories and chapters, but I also would like immediate gratification too

9/6/22, 6:55 AM
@Focus I would love to see an alt ending where Jesus falls to the corruption!
Jack
9/6/22, 6:51 AM
This is such a fucking hot chapter! You had elements in here that I genuinely wasn't expecting, like Erik cumming every time his cock was hit. You could have written us 10,000 words on that and I still would have been shooting days after. Yet another triumph, and I'm looking forward to how your twisted mind takes care of Eli!
Jack
9/6/22, 6:45 AM
I absolutely love this series, and I absolutely need Uri to get what's coming to him, because that kind of shitty narcissism is what gives a lot of the gay community in my area a bad name. Also, I just like bottoms being put in their place by a mind-numbing amount of cum!
9/6/22, 5:41 AM
Someone that can't be deceived is a nice textural variation. I love how distinct the dynamics and situation is with each different target and family in this story. No characters feel interchangeable at all. Really enjoying it.
9/6/22, 5:40 AM
A very nice twist with a completely helpless man-cub this time around. You tell the story so well, and each time it's fresh and new. Kudos.
Anonymous
9/5/22, 8:40 PM
I LOVE this story!! I really hope you keep writing it! There’s not much out there in this niche of hypnosis/humiliation but no sex :D

9/6/22, 4:48 AM
@Thanks! And I agree, it's hard to find this type of stuff. Wish others would start writing more of it too!
9/6/22, 4:18 AM
These are a teeeease, can't wait!