Recent Comments

7/16/25, 2:00 AM
Please continue this series! I am loving it and it is stellar
7/15/25, 10:57 PM
Great story. Definitely a fantasy.
7/15/25, 10:55 PM
Not bad.
7/14/25, 12:11 PM
The quality of your writing is exquisite as ever, towing that line between the erotic and a hint of terror, you always do have some amazing ways of showing the perspective of the hypnotized victims in your story.

7/15/25, 9:23 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Really appreciate all the positive words you've left me since I've begun writing. Glad you're enjoying it! Thank you.
7/15/25, 8:45 PM
I think I’ll write a sequel.
7/15/25, 5:46 PM
I can’t wait for more this was so hot
Willie Cici
7/15/25, 4:32 PM
So hot!! And plot twists that leave you thinking. Love it.
Jul 14, 2025
7/15/25, 3:08 PM
Thanks for posting another hot story. Here's hoping the new drones pass out more condoms and receive orders to join in the fun when the hive transmits "THIS DRONE SUBMITTS".
7/15/25, 1:40 PM
hot store can't wait for more
Cubreader
7/12/25, 6:04 AM
As if I wasn’t gripped as it is with the first chapter, this installment had me so hot and bothered I had to cum back again and again while reading it. Makes me even more excited where the author will take the story. Lots of options to explore, from the current flashback and each camp newcomer’s corruption, to Connor’s backstory, and jumping back to Edward’s present (and perhaps future?). Gonna set up camp and eagerly wait for what cums next.

7/13/25, 10:04 AM
@Cubreader Thanks for the comment, glad you're enjoying it! More good stuff in store. Anything you'd especially love to see? More insight into Connor and the start of Edward's corruption coming up.

Cubreader
7/14/25, 7:57 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Looking forward to all the good stuff! Thank you for responding to comments, I really couldn't help sharing how much I enjoyed the story. I agree with the anonymous commenter about the excellent world building. You describe the descent to corruption of each character so well that I end up savoring every word. I'm curious to see how Rausch's origins (and maybe how his dynamic with Charlie began), and how this impacts them in the story's present. With Edward's corruption of Ollie, I wonder to see how he will teach Ollie his ways. Will Edward be similar to Rausch or will he have his own ways of making the most of the white orchid? The parallel stories worked so well in terms of how it gave the narrative have a particular rhythm, maybe drawing the parallels again to Ollie's corruption and Edward's and weaving them together sounds like an exciting way to tie the story together.

7/15/25, 10:45 AM
@Cubreader Love these extra thoughts. Will definitely try to flex the parallel stories across time since people are enjoying that. Will need some reworking of my drafts but I'm excited to integrate that a bit more. One of the things I'm trying hard at is I really want to make each of the characters feel like individuals even if similar things happen to them, or they are influenced by the same substance. So the parallel might be able to come in there...good ideas! Charlie does have some interesting backstory. We'll at least seeing more of him in the next chapter to get more of an idea of who he is and what Rausch has done to him.