Recent Comments

10/19/22, 3:47 AM
Reminds me of Wesley Bracken, imaginative and freaky but...not as cynical or mean? Fave Toby Though admired how played physical form to provide the "Invisible lover." Not sure how six teated lactation fits into papa bear. Liked it but dislike when bad end cheats. Good end of positive likable if unusual tend to be more generous. While obviously not the point curious peek in on the tenement of Toby. Heh seems you be up for [the family of ten dads challenge](https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/run-with-this-10-dads-meme/2735) with this. Interesting development of the living store too. Like has more...positive intention. Compared to how other jobs can eat you up ..well at least can be part of something intended to be positive Wonder what happens
Anonymous
10/19/22, 1:25 AM
God this is hot. I'd love to see a toilet corruption if you have plans for one.
10/19/22, 12:13 AM
You can't leave us on a cliff hanger like this! "Oh, he did notice" was maybe my favorite quote so far, it just cracked me up. Do notice that in Liam's first paragraph you accidentally jump between first and third person and sometimes repeating words in a sentence because of that, but it's no big deal :)
10/19/22, 12:02 AM
Very interesting. Can't wait for more.
10/18/22, 10:47 PM
Looking forward to future chapters. Obviously Tom is learning to be a 'Good Boy'. I just wonder what else he will learn & if his folks have anything to do with it [??]. I do agree that his 'change' in outlook & behavior was a little sudden, but I still enjoyed this chapter. [Perhaps the author might 'consider' a few tapes that would change some of Tom's 'prior-memories', [like making him a studious nerd for example rather than the total slacker he now is] & thus affecting his current behavior [???] ... Also a change in self image [body image] & sexual tastes might be in order? I always enjoy stories where a character develops a radically new personality based on the new implanted past memories .
Jan 30, 2019
10/18/22, 10:23 PM
Somehow i missed the straight tag, nonetheless it was a great story
Mac
10/18/22, 10:17 PM
Please continue this with more victims and even more humiliation. Great idea and very well written.
10/18/22, 9:42 PM
This literally gets better and better. AMAZING work.
10/18/22, 9:25 PM
Perhaps, Mikey will have some 'new' previous memories suggested to him..[ about his always being bullied back in school ?? How about starting to remember that when he's stressed-out he's ALWAYS had a problem pissing his pants ?? Perhaps he's starting to remember that he's always felt inferior to his more manly school & work chums ???] Perhaps he now remembers that he's always been a weak little Beta 'boy', secretly admiring all the SUPERIOR Alpha Men [Bros]....And of course isn't it about time that he starts to totally forget [or lose-all-interest] in the front-office girl...After all he's beginning to realize that he's NOT MAN ENOUGH to satisfy a women, and NEVER has been, [& he suddenly realizes the she, like all the previous women in his past, is actually laughing at his true natural inferiority behind his back !] ....Also perhaps the story could at some point develop into Mikey's 'new' memories of having always acutely been ashamed of his total lack of endowment???.....Just some ideas that your first three chapters suggested to me , as you see I'm into total corruption & changing a fellows previous memories to develop a new [different] reality! But come-on and please, give us a new [nice long] chapter !!!
10/16/22, 3:24 PM
Wow, I fucking loved this! The detail was immaculate—from the moment when Aaron feels Seth’s sperm trying to shove itself into his rectal walls to all the visceral descriptions of Noxiel and the fuck. I thought the theme and reversal of “sin” as a concept was very clever and thoughtful. Also dig the pain play kink, I don’t see enough of that here and I’ve been deliberately avoiding putting it into my stories so as not to scare people off, haha. I’m not demanding you write anything you don’t want to, but as someone who has had several stories I really care about receive lukewarm response, I encourage you to carry on with what you genuinely want to write regardless of the reception. Chasing it will only make the writing emptier than if you wrote for the bliss of writing, worldbuilding, creating, etc. There’s always a balance to be struck, to be fair, and as writers we also tend to feed off good feedback, so it’s totally up to you. Good luck on your future writing! I have you followed and I’ll be looking out for more mpreg and cum inflation!

Arachnus
10/18/22, 9:14 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I'll give it some thought. You've plenty of hot stories yourself, and it's nice to hear my imagination isn't as scary as I think.