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8/4/22, 1:12 PM
Wow so much engagement! You have clearly hit a note. I love it when a story gets so much reaction! Great writing!

9/5/22, 10:53 AM
@Mrdick Thanks!
9/3/22, 3:33 PM
Just now trying to read through this story, it’s really hot! It seems like Tanner’s M.O with Jiang is to influence everyone around Jiang, rather than brute forcing him into sexual situations. (Both here and in the sacred circle he coerced him into accepting the changes through peer pressure.) Interested to see if that also comes into play when Tanner gets Jiang and his dad together.

9/5/22, 10:00 AM
@11037 Great point about the sacred circle. I had forgotten that. I am getting the impression that Tanner might try to recruit Jiang to his side. Tempt him with these powers to change reality. This chapter seems like Tanner showing off, not as a warning but as an offer. Jiang seems to have some resentment towards his adopted parents and life en general. Maybe Tanner will convice him that if they work together, He can change his family just like he wants to.
9/5/22, 6:04 AM
Oh man. Superheroes, Wrestling and Hot men in Humiliation! 3 of my favorite things rolled into one! This story was a great read and loved to see the Proud hero brought down from his own former sidekicks info. I only wish Blue Flame was there to see or help with his downfall! I hope you can revisit this type of wrestling theme with other stories down the road Kyle! With or without heroes. Thanks again for the hot read I loved it!

9/5/22, 8:36 AM
Hi. Thank you I’m glad you enjoyed it. It’s always fun to get feedback. I appreciate it@AxelCyclone
9/4/22, 11:17 PM
Another awesome story by a talented writer.

9/5/22, 8:36 AM
Thank you for taking the trouble to write. You’re too generous @Scot6789
9/5/22, 7:28 AM
I hope this story never ends. It's so hot!!
9/5/22, 5:25 AM
Mmmmmm…now this is GOOD. Descriptions of classic inductions were the first clues I had to my own hypnosis fetish, so reading a beautifully-crafted, old-fashioned hypnosis session was like catnip! And I admit that I was a bit afraid of Sydney being the classic “drunk on power” hypnotist who shows up in so many of these stories…but the inclusion of that second scene, where he is shy, cute, excitable, and above all CONSENSUAL (the line about him dropping the subject without a second thought if Garrett didn’t want it was perfection) proves that those fears are unfounded. You are a gifted writer! :)

9/5/22, 7:20 AM
@Feed Your Head Thanks so much! I definitely intend to keep this story consensual, I'm not a fan of the typical narrative you tend to see on this site.
9/5/22, 5:22 AM
Fantastic beginning! However, I hope you’ll excuse me for being cautious about reading future chapters… The last two stories on this site that dealt with stripping away of free will from someone the controller ‘supposedly’ loved went…dark…and horribly cruel, very, very quickly.

9/5/22, 7:18 AM
@Null0byte hey, I completely understand your concern. I'm a big believer in consent and hope to reflect that in this story. Not planning on going dark at all, and instead maintaining a mutually beneficial and understanding relationship between Sydney and Garett. Glad you enjoyed!
9/5/22, 4:18 AM
Thanks to everyone reading and to those giving feedback! very much appreciated :) chapter 2 should be coming soon with regular updates after that.
Rex
9/5/22, 3:50 AM
This was one of the hottest things I've read in a long time. Sorry you had a bad experience and are not finishing it. I'd love to read more of this.
Anonymous
9/5/22, 3:13 AM
This is one of the best stories I’ve read on this site. Just checks all the boxes & more. So fucking hot. Incredible work! Please keep going!