Wow. This is another fantastic chapter. Scarlett and the date are excellent. They don’t just go for coffee, which would’ve been boring. You had them get bubble tea, which was a first for Freddy and entertaining, fitting a Nutiper story :) Scarlett taking them around to the park and to see ducks was nice, and her ending the date symmetrically and agreeing with Freddy that it went horrible but letting it end the way it did was just really well done and a pleasure to read. You managed to give us even more hints that there’s more going on with Freddy without spelling it out. There some amazing dialog in here. When Scarlett asks if he’s going to flex for her, he says only if you tell me to. The he gets hopeful, and immediately thinks of the phrase Uri would have said. Freddy is incredibly nervous through out the date. Way over the top, for how confident and self-assured with Uri he is. I think he’s nervous it won’t work out because he wants to use Scarlett so that he doesn’t have to come to terms with the fact that he’s obsessed with Uri. His own inner monologue even spells that out a bit more. Freddy’s obsession with Uri is further hinted at when Scarlett says he talks about his roommate a lot. But in case you missed all that, Freddy even mentions that Julia, his ex, said that Freddy complained about Uri more than he paid attention to her. As in, Uri was one of the things that broke them up too. Maybe Julia didn’t just break up with him because he never wanted sex, but he didn’t want to hear anything she said so he only chose to remember the thing about his sex drive because then he could act like she was the unreasonable one. Because he’s not a sex addict that needs it all the time. Throughout the series, Freddy keeps doing things to subconsciously sabotage himself in such a way that he can have what he really wants but then blame someone or something else for it and not confront himself. Plenty of signs of that with Julia. He keeps making wishes with Freddy that make him more into a real life gay wet dream, but accidentally. He keeps accidentally giving Uri more control in subtle ways. How do you accidentally give someone the ability to command you to flex whenever, and you are powerless to resist? But now, after accidentally proposing that he and Freddy make an agreement so that he’s super horny for topping Uri, he goes on a date with an amazing woman, and he fucks it up almost immediately. Who wears a tank top and shorts to a date? It was low key and he only had those clothes, but why did the wishing rock only give him those clothes? Why didn’t he go get something new? He had all afternoon to prepare, but that didn’t even occur to him. Then he just makes things awkward by overthinking them over and over again. And being distracted entirely thinking about Uri instead of Scarlett. I love Freddy. Your writing of him is stellar. I love how you’ve managed to give him what he wants (and what I want, and what Uri wants) through out the story. He’s an ultimate gay fantasy now. He gets to have his cake and eat it too. He gets turned on by what makes him angry and to fuck the throat of his willing roommate who he is obsessed with, while still being straight. Now he gets to enjoy topping Uri, while still being straight, because he didn’t expect Uri to call his bluff, and it’s not his fault he did. What can Freddy do? The wishing rock made him like fucking Uri. He’s not gay tho! Let’s talk about Freddy fucking Uri. That was soooooo hot! Uri mentioning that Freddy’s dick is a foot long earlier in the chapter really added to how hot Freddy is in my mind. I don’t think either of them had said how long it was before, other than really long. In my mind, there’s a huge difference between an 8 inch dick and a 12 inch dick. An 8 inch is quite long in real life and could be considered huge. A 12 inch is another 50% on top of that and just… very unusual and exceptional. When Freddy slips his dick between Uri’s legs, rubs it along Freddy’s balls and cock, and it still sticks out and tents Uri’s apron, I really got a feel for how long it is. And boy was that a hot image. In fact, the build up in this chapter alone to that particular scene is so well done. When he gets the tingle when hugging Scarlett, I was hoping that meant the wishing rock had done its thing. Then when he gets home and something is still off, I got more excited. Then when Uri was doing dishes, I was like Fuck yeah, here it comes. I don’t find Uri hot. Besides his ass, you haven’t really given enough detail for me to picture him. Or I don’t remember the details. Freddy is the hot one, by miles, to me. But the thing is, that doesn’t matter. You do such an amazing job of explaining how hot Uri gets Freddy that I’m not really thinking of Uri; I’m still thinking of Freddy, even as he tells us about Uri. That whole scene is such a slow burn tease for the reader. Freddy takes his time noticing Uri’s bedroom and the porn playing, and to try to puzzle out what it means, even though it’s obvious. Freddy teases himself and us by taking a second to then watch Uri. Then he’s so sexy when he goes up behind Uri, but doesn’t get straight into fucking Uri. He kisses him. Not gay, and not compelled (I assume) to kiss Uri, but does it anyways. When he eventually gets to the deep dicking, I was ready to explode myself. Him calling the shots and doing it slow, despite Uri wanting it fast, was delicious. Then him figuring out how to make Uri come hands free with his realization of how to rub Uri’s prostate was fantastic. Also very thoughtful of him considering the wishing rock hadn’t compelled him to make Uri enjoy the fuck to that degree. I have questions now, of course. I hope we get answers to them but am also happy for them not be answered. Is Freddy ever going to acknowledge, to himself or Uri, that things have gone the way he wanted? Is Uri or anyone else going to call him on the fact that he’s at least been bi all along? Or the fact that he likes Uri, and it’s not just because of the rock? How did the last wish work out? Does Uri now have the urge to something house related whenever he gets horny? Does he get horny when he does house work? Is it like how Freddy enjoys taking the trash out? Is Freddy always horny to top Uri now, or does he get super horny to rub his dick against Uri’s skin/holes when Uri does house work? What’s Uri going to wish for? Is he going to give himself muscles or a huge dick so he can fuck Freddy? Will he wish himself to be more dominant sometimes so he can boss Freddy around the way Freddy also wants? Freddy has been exploring that side of himself. Will he somehow accidentally wish Uri into a versatile top? Is Bryant, the mail man with the crush on Uri, going to feature into things somehow? Is Freddy going to bump into Scarlett again? Scarlett was great. I’d love for them to bump into each other and for Scarlett to hint that she just got out of bad relationship and that’s why she knows Freddy wasn’t what she needed. Or that she dated a gay guy in high school or something. Right now, I like her, but she’s damn near perfect: hot, understanding, cool, confident and one dimensional, just what the story needed :) I’d love for her to be in it again and get just another tiny hint of what she’s about. I’m obviously way into this story. I should be writing my own stuff as opposed to writing 1000 word comments on this one. But I really love it and am super excited when I know there’s another chapter posted. Thank you for posting. Thank you for posting pretty consistently. Thank you for not writing this exactly as I expect and surprising me. Thank you for writing so well. And don’t feel *obligated* to continue writing and posting this because it’s a lot of work, but please continue writing and posting this because I love it :)

Love it !! I usually prefer when there are no pictures. It kinda takes me out of the imaginary representation of characters I have for the story !!

Such a hot story. Love the photos. Excited to see whats next

You had me for a second with that afterward :satisfied: Definitely looking forward to more!

Well, could have ended worse for him. Good story overall.

Really really amazing start. So excited to read more man.

So amazing...so fucking hot. Congratulations on an amazing chapter, the first fuck was perfect. I'm hoping that now that Uri has Freddy where he wants him...addicted to fucking him...that Uri's control over the wishes will intensify. Freddy now wants Uri to be irresistible to men, to have the perfect power-bottom body, to need him every minute of every day...and they can just wish together for a house slave to do all those pesky dishes. Can't wait for the next chapter. It comes out every Saturday?

God, Freddy's gradual transformation is so hot. You're doing such an excellent job with him and I can't wait to see more!

The apron. Lol so hot. Always such a treat to get a series from you!

Can't wait to read more, that was so hot!!