Extremely excited you’re continuing this story!!!

It's sexier when Nick is a good boy for Darius. Much more fun when Darius is in charge.

I really hope you are going to finish the story after I read 8 chapters of it. I need to know what happened. Please finish. Thank you!

Love the ground idea and found the first episode until the chastity very hot. Not a big fan of chastity. I think it’s much hotter when pleasure is used to make the mind obey. Hope we get that in the next episode.

You don’t even know how excited I was to see an update of this story. I check your profile literally every day! I really enjoyed this chapter! Darius’s awareness and realization of the situation was both exciting and haunting. I felt his feeling of helplessness throughout the story too…gave me chills! So many factors playing into the story. Who’s in control? What’s the source of the changes and control? It gets me excited to see how your story plays out! I hope we get to see more of Nick as a good boy. Alpha Nick is low key super hot but Darius in charge and Nick as a himbo sub top is what I came here for! I definitely can’t wait to see more smut too hahaha

Great story please continue.

What a Revelation! And definitely my favorite kind of apocalypse, when the spiritual upheaval leads to such heights of insight and pleasure mingled together. And here I was, feeling for poor Talley all the time. It’s been quite the phantom release for me too! Thanks for the gift, as ever

You do such an amazing job of balancing the sex-scenes with plot development. That makes stories so much more arousing. I particularly enjoy in this story how the conversion thru sex is simply a device the goo uses and that they aren't turned into horny sluts(an over used trope). I love that they just wanna spread the goo as best they can.

Really excited to see how this story continues. Huge fan of the bearification — the bulking up, body and facial hair, leather, smoking — and how drawn out the transformation is…and having it run in the family certainly helps the story too!

OK, damnnnnnnnnnnn bro! I loved the first chapter of this and put in my comments how it made me dump 3 loads before I made it all the way through. Then I got to this part. I was going nuts for this through the whole thing, and largely because of the first story. I had anticipation for the transformation and what was going on, so the fact that you seemed to really draw things out with him being at the party and running into a ton of the jocks. The changes start slow and as I'm reading I'm looking for every clue and asking myself "Is it happening? Is it speeding up?" Since I had the info from the first story I was on the edge of my seat. Then I got to the game of beer pong. He's oblivious to the "conversion juice" he's been given. I love that. He thinks he's doing well. He's changing as the game goes on. Getting cockier. I loved when he walked in and they were breaking up their huddle around the beer pong cups and pulling up their jockstraps and shorts. FUCK. I want to guzzle that juice down. So it's no surprise to me that the effect of the beer pong is what made me nut first in this chapter. I got that far, though, cuz it was such a slow burn. Then after a break I come back to the story and pick up where I left off. Now it's the two of them going at it in the bedroom and I'm right on the edge of cumming thru all the transformation and all. Your descriptions are amazing. It's so well done! As he's changing and his cock is transforming, a couple of times he makes a comment that something is happening in the base of his cock. But it just gets left and other changes are described. How his cock turns deep red, then how it's growing and thickening and he's pistoning in and out, and there's some cocky talk back and forth, and he's noticing that the base is changing again getting thicker and veinier, and you just keep teasing it along -- which drove my own cock nuts cuz i'm obsessed with knotted cock, myself, and so I'm in total anticipation of this. And then it happens. His knot forms. And it's like the final change that completes him. And that's what made me dump load #2, right along with him pumping his own jizz into Anthony and bloating his belly, and Anthony is cumming but he's drinking all that "brotein" down right as it is being squirted out. Thank you for this amazing story. I am definitely going to revisit it and I won't be surprised if I cum in all the same places.