Recent Comments

Zander
4/8/25, 1:55 AM
Good prologue, I hope the next chapters will be longer and will reveal the characters better, as well as the method of hypnosis of Danny and we will find out how and when he began to control his brother Eric and why? It's only about sex or something else) I hope the next chapters will answer this question.

4/8/25, 12:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) The original story is at https://mcstories.com. It will answer all your questions about how Danny came to own Eric's ass.
4/8/25, 8:43 AM
Excellent story here -- I love the turnabout. The humiliation is very well woven into the story as well. I think I would have loved to have seen the scenes at the different tables at Shadows expanded more, though giving the tantalizing descriptions does let the reader take it further places.
Triplemeatpizza
4/1/25, 6:12 PM
I love it, it's strangely sad....

4/8/25, 8:36 AM
@Triplemeatpizza Thank you very much ! I'm glad you liked it, and you saw the emotional complexity I tried to put in that ^^
3/31/25, 8:59 AM
That was a really fascinating little story. it's rare to see one where a character changes twice like that. Very Flowers For Algernon.

4/8/25, 8:32 AM
@[d-boi](/user/show/10037283) Thank you ! I'm glad that idea resonated ! I didn't know about that story, but checking its synopsis, I see the resemblances ^^'
4/1/25, 7:36 AM
I thought one of the bros would accidentally take the powder thinking it's a protein powder lol

4/8/25, 8:28 AM
@[fAUSmohawk](/user/show/928623) This wouldn't have worked because (most of) them are straight, so from straight to straight, it wouldn't have been interesting ^^'
AAA
4/7/25, 9:20 PM
"The tag “french” implies that the story is written in French. I wouldn’t use it, even if there are French characters. You might turn away some readers who can’t read French and don’t even bother to look into the story because of the tag." This nearly happened to me, except for a misclick on my part.

4/8/25, 8:26 AM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) I'm sorry for that, this has been fixed ^^'
Anonymous
4/8/25, 7:11 AM
Series is great, can’t wait to see where it leads to next
JJ
4/8/25, 6:47 AM
i get relaxed reading
4/8/25, 6:16 AM
Very very nice! Ethan and Alex connected deeply in so many ways. Their evolution was both beautiful and exciting. Personally i thought this chapter was the perfect way to end the story. i am excited to see where you plan to take us all next! What a ride it's been so far! Thanks so much for sharing your imagination and writing talent.
4/8/25, 5:13 AM
Wow! This is quit a interesting homage to the original story and can’t wait to read more.