Recent Comments

9/1/22, 8:41 PM
It was an interesting chapter but to say it is BDSM is wrong. Like with Luke the coach is having issues in my opinion coming to terms with whom he is sexually speaking. Then again I could be wrong only our beloved writer can say I am right or wrong. But what is true he is most gifted author.

9/1/22, 9:03 PM
@br6205 It’s not BDSM it’s Dom/sub

9/1/22, 9:23 PM
@Charlie Walker I stand corrected.. By the way aren't they both dominant at times. Humans are complex and as I see both are in ways controlling and being controlled or am I reading myself into this not what you the creator intended.

9/1/22, 10:01 PM
@br6205 Outside of sex Vic is more dominant, but during sex Coach is the dominant one.

9/2/22, 7:03 PM
@Charlie Walker Yes I totally agree which makes them compatible& a great twosome.
May 26, 2020
9/2/22, 6:30 PM
Best story i have ever read on this site, for real, and im not even like reading that much i just skip the meaty part, but for some reason your way of writing really really make me want to read it all, are you a witch?

9/2/22, 6:37 PM
@Geiru I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm no witch, unfortunately, but I'm immensely proud at how this story turned out. Your comment was a huge pick-me-up today! Thanks so much for commenting, too!
9/2/22, 6:07 PM
The boy is primed and ready for more of a proper education! While that also include other kinks and rules or just reinforce the chasity.
9/2/22, 5:55 PM
Wow! This is an amazing start! Can't wait to read more! Glad we'll get to see another teen boy arriving at Astoris but I hope we will get to continue seeing Jim/JC-012 as he is processed and integrated into his new society and home
8/29/22, 7:43 PM
Holy fuck this is the hottest thing I have ever read. I am in awe, I wish I could experience this. Could I donate somewhere?

8/29/22, 11:56 PM
@Bowie unfortunately i don't write for money. I've had only bad experiences taking money to write. but... maybe i should. try and get a novel out.

9/2/22, 3:58 PM
Ahh oki, just for clarity i wasen't looking for something in return. Regardless I completely understand @Daisy I. B. de Melcker
9/2/22, 2:45 PM
awww i hope it works out between coach and his eager pussyboy :)
great but...
9/1/22, 3:39 PM
i need the Luke story

9/1/22, 9:14 PM
@great but... Both!!!!

9/2/22, 2:24 PM
@great but... I am working on it. Sometimes I need a break to recharge. I’m not abandoning Luke. And TBH a comment like this is kinda rude.
9/2/22, 12:27 PM
Oh goodness. This is fantastic. I am definitely completely worked-up over the eye-to-eye ability to capture Mike and make him more committed. Please write more.
8/31/22, 9:15 AM
Liking the sound of Tony.... would like to read more

8/31/22, 11:17 AM
@ldnrubbr That's it for this one I'm afraid. It's an "and they all lived happily ever after". Clearly Joroen's about to have a great night getting spitroasted by Phil and Tony but beyond that their futures are up to you now. This story was only ever meant to be a quick one. I've got other ideas I'm excited to move onto that I think you'll like even more ;)

9/1/22, 7:55 AM
@SavageSubRed Looking forward to your future stories!

9/1/22, 3:36 PM
@ldnrubbr The next one will be something that's been on my mind for a long time. Love the profile pic btw.

9/2/22, 9:36 AM
@SavageSubRed Thanks! Love a cigar shoved in the gob of my fully rubbered or leathered hoods
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9/2/22, 7:24 AM
Hey! How's it hanging? I'm hanging limp and used after multiple wack a dick sessions. I read all 14 chapters in one night and beat my meat nearly constantly. I think I dropped 5 or 6 loads. I'm needing a ciggie real bad, but I don't smoke nor ever have. I love Brody being such a cock and cum luver. My favorite scenes are the teen jock bitch getting plowed by his coach while wearing his white speedo, and the mausoleum gang fuck session on Halloween. Now that daddy jock Hank is being prepared for future bottom bitchdom, I'm hoping that he gets big cocks from teen to mature up his tight virgin ass. Keep up the great work, and gratitude for 14 chapters you have written so far. πŸ‘…πŸ”₯πŸ–€πŸ˜Ž