Recent Comments

9/2/22, 8:55 PM
This was so frakking hot! I loved the scene with Harry and Gordy! Well done!
9/2/22, 8:40 PM
Your English is great. I wanted to tell you before I got further & will write comments on the story when I finish.
9/1/22, 8:41 PM
It was an interesting chapter but to say it is BDSM is wrong. Like with Luke the coach is having issues in my opinion coming to terms with whom he is sexually speaking. Then again I could be wrong only our beloved writer can say I am right or wrong. But what is true he is most gifted author.

9/1/22, 9:03 PM
@br6205 It’s not BDSM it’s Dom/sub

9/1/22, 9:23 PM
@Charlie Walker I stand corrected.. By the way aren't they both dominant at times. Humans are complex and as I see both are in ways controlling and being controlled or am I reading myself into this not what you the creator intended.

9/1/22, 10:01 PM
@br6205 Outside of sex Vic is more dominant, but during sex Coach is the dominant one.

9/2/22, 7:03 PM
@Charlie Walker Yes I totally agree which makes them compatible& a great twosome.
May 26, 2020
9/2/22, 6:30 PM
Best story i have ever read on this site, for real, and im not even like reading that much i just skip the meaty part, but for some reason your way of writing really really make me want to read it all, are you a witch?

9/2/22, 6:37 PM
@Geiru I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm no witch, unfortunately, but I'm immensely proud at how this story turned out. Your comment was a huge pick-me-up today! Thanks so much for commenting, too!
9/2/22, 6:07 PM
The boy is primed and ready for more of a proper education! While that also include other kinks and rules or just reinforce the chasity.
9/2/22, 5:55 PM
Wow! This is an amazing start! Can't wait to read more! Glad we'll get to see another teen boy arriving at Astoris but I hope we will get to continue seeing Jim/JC-012 as he is processed and integrated into his new society and home
8/29/22, 7:43 PM
Holy fuck this is the hottest thing I have ever read. I am in awe, I wish I could experience this. Could I donate somewhere?

8/29/22, 11:56 PM
@Bowie unfortunately i don't write for money. I've had only bad experiences taking money to write. but... maybe i should. try and get a novel out.

9/2/22, 3:58 PM
Ahh oki, just for clarity i wasen't looking for something in return. Regardless I completely understand @Daisy I. B. de Melcker
9/2/22, 2:45 PM
awww i hope it works out between coach and his eager pussyboy :)
great but...
9/1/22, 3:39 PM
i need the Luke story

9/1/22, 9:14 PM
@great but... Both!!!!

9/2/22, 2:24 PM
@great but... I am working on it. Sometimes I need a break to recharge. I’m not abandoning Luke. And TBH a comment like this is kinda rude.
9/2/22, 12:27 PM
Oh goodness. This is fantastic. I am definitely completely worked-up over the eye-to-eye ability to capture Mike and make him more committed. Please write more.