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Iriefal
9/2/22, 11:21 PM
Nice idea. I am loving it, just please describe more how main character looks like (Personally I like smaller dominant, so if you can, pls make him small cute nerd with dominant bone in his body. Ps, dominant not top, you can be bottom but still dominant, but that is just a small thing, I myself am switch in both)
9/2/22, 10:36 PM
Goddamn I am loving this story... I've shot twice every chapter so far!!!!
9/2/22, 10:17 PM
Great job, really liking the start. Looking forward to part 2.
EJG
9/2/22, 9:43 PM
Damned,this was hot stuff. Tanner is so perverted and bad,he's so good. Nothing hotter than dark,''bad'' and perverted beating goodie goodie wholesome hero,every little once in a while
9/2/22, 7:17 PM
Subscribed to this story, got the email of a new chapter, dropped everything to read it, hard as a rock and cumming in seconds. This is one of my favorite stories here. Kudos!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!

9/2/22, 9:23 PM
@EdIam thanks, man :) It’s nice to have fans of this twisted little tale.
Martin
9/2/22, 9:05 PM
That's really fun and hot to read! I really look forward to read more chapters! One technical request though: If something is wrong with a submissed story, please don't resubmit, but EDIT the already uploaded story! There is this huge blue Edit button on the top you can use to change all aspects of your stories.
9/2/22, 8:57 PM
Great chapter--I'm so glad to see you continuing this! The one thing I'd love to see more of is corruption of the men who get changed by the ooze. I think it would have been cool to see more of Flint going from being a straight arrow cop to becoming more wicked (like wanting to convert his partner or Ren).
9/2/22, 8:55 PM
This was so frakking hot! I loved the scene with Harry and Gordy! Well done!
9/2/22, 8:40 PM
Your English is great. I wanted to tell you before I got further & will write comments on the story when I finish.
9/1/22, 8:41 PM
It was an interesting chapter but to say it is BDSM is wrong. Like with Luke the coach is having issues in my opinion coming to terms with whom he is sexually speaking. Then again I could be wrong only our beloved writer can say I am right or wrong. But what is true he is most gifted author.

9/1/22, 9:03 PM
@br6205 It’s not BDSM it’s Dom/sub

9/1/22, 9:23 PM
@Charlie Walker I stand corrected.. By the way aren't they both dominant at times. Humans are complex and as I see both are in ways controlling and being controlled or am I reading myself into this not what you the creator intended.

9/1/22, 10:01 PM
@br6205 Outside of sex Vic is more dominant, but during sex Coach is the dominant one.

9/2/22, 7:03 PM
@Charlie Walker Yes I totally agree which makes them compatible& a great twosome.